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"The Tickle in my Throat"   [E] by Alisha P. ☕

Mini-review:

It read better for me the second time around. I really like the line "I lie when it hides" and I understand how a person will refuse to say what needs to be said which is how the last line "I will not say 'goodbye'" hits me. I give it a 4.2 as is. That said, it needs to have its grammar checked and could use an edit.

Prompt: Have you ever had a tickle in your throat? Tell us about it.

I'm sure I have! But I seldom keep track of such mundane events and rarely remember them. I do keep emotions back at times and have not said 'goodbye' as suggested in the poem.