L'aura del Campo

#12 sashimi takaki ktanka

tataki = haikuish with place
sashimi = haikuish but not a definite place
ktanka = like a tanka
*FF = foto / photo


376 204a Smoke and ash — / people frown at the sky / and worry
377 204b He toddles around / the block — hair aflame / with winter (DeAnna Williams)
378 204c A gasp / and a cough — sky / falling with ash
379 204d Smoke hides / the horizon — the sun / sets red and angry
380 204e A slice of red / velvet cake — chocolate / by any color

204 [9/7]

109a After the storm — your world view forever altered
109b Where new shoots grow — last year's pinecone forks the path *FF?
109c The willow bends yellow branches to groom the river *FF?
109d green grass between grey sage — path to shooting stars *FF?
109e spent buttercups — yellowbells darken to gold to brown *FF?
109f Blue juniper berries eager to be plucked crushed smelled *FF?

109: These seem far too familiar. As if I've put them on line already. So... I will look before redoing more. The following may need to be done:

I was right *sad* *glad* Poems can be found in "Sashimi [175.57- ]"  [54-57] and "Sashimi"  [101-119] *starred below. (for my eyes only)

*109 [4/25]
*110 [4/26]
*111 [4/26]
*112 [4/26]
*113 [4/27]
*114 [4/27]
*115 [4/28]
*116 [4/29]
*117 [4/29]
*118 [4/29]
*119 [4/29]
120 [4/29]
121 [4/29]
122 a regular poem about petrichor
123 [4/29]
124 walking dead
125 zmitri
126 zmitri
127 [4/30]
128 [4/30]
129 for Merry
130 family
131 a response
132 [5/1]
133 [5/1]
134 [5/2]
135 [5/2]
136 [5/2]
137 on line zmitri
138 [5/4]
139 ... on line

153, 154, 155, 159, 160, 162, 163, 165, 166, 168, 169, 170, 174, 175, 176, 177, 178, 179, numbered. on-line? 155f is definitely on line... or at least already edited and printed.

181-211: already edited and on-line

214- 221 on line

224 [9/7] newest - on line today- above

I have a problem because I didn't start at the beginning... and jumped around.

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