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Poetic Journal Year 166 B.E.

by Kåre Enga in Montana

Rated: GC · Book · Writing · #1543433

Poems and prose written between March 20th, 2009-2010

Poems, prose, sketches written in the year 166. (March 20th, 2009-2010) Sketches will be entered and put on *private* until ready for public viewing (if ever

). Feel free to comment. If you think a poem is strong enough to make it its own item please tell me.

Higgins Street Bridge, April 25th 2009, Missoula, Montana

Higgins Street Bridge, April 25th 2009, Missoula, Montana

"The Race"

April 25th, 2009 in Missoula, Montana. The Higgins Street bridge over the Clark Fork River with Mt. Jumbo in the background.

In Book:
166.1-42 Montana
166.43-49 Kansas, South Dakota
166.50-71
In Book "Minnesota Blue"
166.72-75 Minnesota, Iowa
166.76-107 Montana
166.138-179 Montana
In Book "Yellow Waterproof"
166.108-137 Costa Rica
In Book "Minnesota Orange"
166.180-

Key: © Kåre Enga [166=Baha'i year beginning on the eve of March 20th.X=page in notepad] year(Gregorian)-month-date

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Iowegian Skye

Aug 7, 2009 at 12:19pm
In response to "166.163 Irish setter <not posted yet>"

Still getting organized, I see.

Bereft and yearning. The "O" is a clever inclusion. There's almost a double conotation with still. to be patient and still and to still persevere. I don't know whether or not that was intentional, but it caught my attention.

Very effective - I can somewhat relate. *sigh*

Kåre Enga in Montana

Jul 26, 2009 at 2:39am
In response to "166.99 "every utterance" <GZ>"

Alfred: I'll have to think about this. It was the least favorite Thursday. Could be divided into separate parts and/or linked. The style is somewhat rambling though... It's closer to "slow poetry".

Ken: Typos are a bane of a writer's existence. Thanks.

This is a bit long... and the least favorite of the four read Thursday night. It could probably be pruned or divided into three separate or linked prose poems. We'll see.

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Carolina Blue

Jul 26, 2009 at 1:26am
In response to "166.99 "every utterance" <GZ>"

I liked this. I'm not sure I agree with Le Troubadour about the rambling of the beginning. It is what it is.

"... and welcomed its imminent arrival." Sorry: I rarely leave its/it's errors unflagged, as they drive me to distraction. I know, I know... don't sweat the small stuff...

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Carolina Blue

Jul 26, 2009 at 1:04am
In response to "166.92 "to the Dog Star" <GZ>"

Very good... I almost always enjoy your prose/poem mixes. Your gift of imagery is brilliant.

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NOVAcatmando

Jul 24, 2009 at 2:35pm
In response to "166.92 "to the Dog Star" <GZ>"

Excellent imagery and a compelling moment captured! Yes, the turn of phrase is inspirational, perhaps you could turn it into a challenge for us lesser scribes.

alfred booth, wanbli ska

Jul 23, 2009 at 5:32am
In response to "166.99 "every utterance" <GZ>"

The beginning rambles too much and needs to be expanded so that each idea has its true place.

THEN, you write the ending; from "And so I begged..." is perfectly written.

#51. 166.183 Green bench, Greenough Park
ID #664341 entered on August 19, 2009 at 6:19pm

#50. 166.182 Aunt Tumbleweed
ID #664340 entered on August 19, 2009 at 6:17pm

#49. 161.181 Teaching an old dog to dance
ID #664339 entered on August 19, 2009 at 6:14pm

#48. 166.180 Cleaning cilantro
ID #664338 entered on August 19, 2009 at 6:09pm

#47. 166.177 Eclipsed (prose)
ID #664335 entered on August 19, 2009 at 6:04pm

#46. 166.174b Iowa August
ID #664326 entered on August 19, 2009 at 6:34pm

#45. 166.174a How grows the vine
ID #664325 entered on August 19, 2009 at 6:32pm

#44. 166.163 Irish setter <not posted yet>
ID #662563 entered on August 7, 2009 at 12:31am

#43. 166.110 Ink *CR <esp,eng>
ID #661275 entered on July 29, 2009 at 12:23am

#42. 166.109 Angel strumpets *CR
ID #661274 entered on July 29, 2009 at 12:06am

#41. 166.99 "every utterance" <GZ>
ID #660425 entered on July 22, 2009 at 9:16pm

#40. 166.93 [sighs of the trees] <G>
ID #660416 entered on July 22, 2009 at 8:53pm

#39. 166.92 "to the Dog Star" <GZ>
ID #660414 entered on July 24, 2009 at 1:54pm

#38. 166.88a-f Trash.2 5-10
ID #656209 entered on June 25, 2009 at 8:43pm

#37. 166.87a-d Trash.2 1-4
ID #656207 entered on June 25, 2009 at 8:37pm

#36. 166.86 "vacuum cleaner" <GZ>
ID #656206 entered on July 23, 2009 at 5:02pm

#35. 166.84a-d
ID #656204 entered on June 25, 2009 at 8:27pm

#34. 166.82* Rosenstein
ID #656201 entered on June 25, 2009 at 8:23pm

#33. 166.81* Rose hips
ID #654268 entered on June 12, 2009 at 6:30pm

#32. 166.77* Joseph's Coat 1570658
ID #653862 entered on June 12, 2009 at 6:20pm

#31. 166.72 These waving fields of Saskachewan
ID #653468 entered on June 6, 2009 at 8:18pm

#30. 166.60* Goddess of the marketplace
ID #651124 entered on May 22, 2009 at 4:34pm

#29. 166.59* Quills of the owl
ID #650782 entered on May 20, 2009 at 3:39pm

#28. 166.54 Trash (4-6) (not blogged yet)
ID #650604 entered on May 19, 2009 at 1:44pm

#27. 166.53* Trash (1-3)
ID #650472 entered on May 18, 2009 at 5:20pm

#26. 166.52* Kiss of the cranes
ID #650279 entered on May 18, 2009 at 5:09pm

#25. 166.51** Remains of a juvenile delinquent
ID #649069 entered on May 16, 2009 at 3:25pm

#24. 166.50 Belly to the sushi bar*
ID #648711 entered on May 8, 2009 at 1:04pm

#23. 166.49 Sioux Falls*
ID #648494 entered on May 6, 2009 at 5:11pm

#22. 166.46 May downpour*
ID #648490 entered on May 11, 2009 at 2:30pm

#21. 166.42** Snow dragon
ID #646918 entered on May 18, 2009 at 5:11pm

#20. 166.41 Heirloom
ID #646915 entered on April 27, 2009 at 2:05pm

#19. 166.40 Horse chestnuts
ID #646511 entered on April 27, 2009 at 12:17pm

#18. 166.39** At the homeless encampment
ID #646508 entered on May 18, 2009 at 5:10pm

#17. 166.38 Wet doll
ID #646335 entered on April 27, 2009 at 1:09pm

#16. 166.37* Collage
ID #646334 entered on May 17, 2009 at 12:42am

#15. 166.34 Horseapples and yellowbells
ID #645508 entered on April 16, 2009 at 1:04pm

#14. 166.33 Turner's Venice
ID #645501 entered on April 24, 2009 at 2:05pm

#13. 166.31 This morning in Venice; Questa mattina a Venezia
ID #644820 entered on April 24, 2009 at 2:02pm

#12. 166.28 Madame Diehl (not posted yet)
ID #644817 entered on May 15, 2009 at 5:19pm

#11. 166.27 Muse on the pop art of Sister Corita
ID #644816 entered on April 27, 2009 at 1:48pm

#10. 166.19 A snowman cares about our memory of water
ID #643635 entered on April 10, 2009 at 10:15am

#9. 166.12 Dreaming her way to the Green Bicycle Tea Shop
ID #642731 entered on April 14, 2009 at 5:37pm

#8. 166.11 Closing time at Butterfly Herbs
ID #642725 entered on March 30, 2009 at 1:45pm

#7. 166.10 1st Peter 3 <SS>
ID #642723 entered on April 21, 2009 at 10:54pm

#6. 166.9 Conversation with a green cardigan
ID #642722 entered on April 2, 2009 at 12:46am

#5. 166.8 "In your topaz dream"
ID #642477 entered on March 27, 2009 at 4:09pm

#4. 166.7 Object of the artist's affection
ID #642476 entered on April 8, 2009 at 12:35pm

#3. 166.3 Runaways
ID #642471 entered on March 27, 2009 at 4:37pm

#2. 166.2 [1st Peter 1] <SS>
ID #642470 entered on March 27, 2009 at 4:20pm

#1. 166.1 The blue stone under the mountain ash <G>
ID #642469 entered on March 27, 2009 at 4:40pm

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