Acid Tongued

First let me say, i am so glad i have found this forum!!!! I personally have three chapters of this thing i wrote a few months ago, and i haven't had many people read it.

To me they sound twisted, and i really don't know what i was thinking when i started writing it. I just need a few people if not one person to either justify what i thought and tell me that it is weird or, tell me its good/ not bad so that i can continue on with the story. They are all 18+ stories in that it has swearing, adult themes etc.

Oh and one last thing. Don't go easy on them. Tell me exactly what you think of the three chapters and be brutally honest. I can take criticism pretty well. Make sure you read them in sequence because...well yeah. I would assume thats common sense. Here they are:

The Letters Of Montague Giles-Chapter 1  (18+) The changing life of a young teenage man (explicit language used) #1360320 by IDWBC

The Letters Of Montague Giles-Chapter 2  (18+) The first events which change Montague's life forever (Explicit Language Used) #1360369 by IDWBC

The Letters Of Montague Giles-Chapter 3  (18+) His Life Was Just Starting To Get Good... (explicit language used) #1360753 by IDWBC