Story Cafe

I would have to agree with the review given by Conpendium. I have noticed many errors that can be corrected by simply re- reading. I like to read my stories outloud sometimes because I hear the differences. I think you should also use the spell check before you post, it can help too.
Description is tough to get down and takes lots of work to get it right. The more you practice/write the better it gets. Just keep writing the story in many different ways to firgure out what sounds better. Point is, it takes time and practice to make it better. We can always be better.