The Lounge

I think this scene is more romantic than erotic. More romantic because of the intimacy of the kiss and the possibility of more. Yet she doesn't want to more, you don't know why. There's an assumption that she's got something else going on in her head.

I don't think it's erotic though. For me, for this scene to be erotic, there needs to be more emotion within the story. There's no description of what's going on within the characters. I realize this is a piece of a whole and the scenes before and the scenes after probably describe what's going on with the characters.

The descriptions are mild compared to what would be considered erotic.