222 words isn't enough for this idea. It feels more like a 'skeleton' of a story. I'll 'flesh it out' after the contest is over.
There are 6 references to 22 in the story: story title, number. of evidence bags, date on the bags, bones in skull, gun caliber and, if you do the math, it's been 22 years since the original murder case.
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