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I've added a new entry to my blog, "Toe in the Water:
         "Oops 3


A little moral tale.
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Great story and a fun story about writing it.
Damon Nomad - Thank you.
I've added a new entry to my blog, "Toe in the Water:
         "Enough, Already


Time for a howl at the moon.
I've added a new entry to my blog, "Toe in the Water:
         "An Ancestral Herring


All you ever wanted to know about herrings.
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My herring's pretty good, but then all my ancestors had pretty good herring, too. Unfortunately when I hurry, I tend to read things wrong; it's usually funny though.
Greetings from Angel!
I'm journeying through Wonderland,
and I'd be delighted to have company *Smile*
Drop by for tea and crumpets with Angie and Fluffy,
help them find the White Rabbit
and restore the passage of time to the castle,
and don't forget to leave an encouraging comment or two to let me know you were there
*HeartT* *Cheshire* *TeaG*
"Angel in Wonderland
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I did indeed drop by your Wonderland file for a quick read, Amethyst Angel 🍀🌸 . You seem to have the bit between your teeth and are progressing at a remarkable pace. It's really a wonderful experience, I can assure you!
I've added a new entry to my blog, "Toe in the Water:
         "Gloria


"Quote" sounds like the mating call of some weird and unseen swamp bird.
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I've also heard frogs saying "quote, quote" on quiet summer evenings.

BREAKING NEWS: In March a recurrent Rabbit Hole appeared at WDC, and it's called The Wonderland Challenge

Here we find a whole lot of busyness filled with naughty kittens, telescopic telescopes and tea parties, but most of all a great deal of storytelling.


 
BOOK
A Wonderous Tumble   (E)
my 2024 Compendium
#2313325 by Hope Wondering


Please Beholden - visit my wonderbook and feel free to comment, I need your encouragement to carry on!

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I have read through your Wonderbook, Hope, and can say that I'm impressed. You have captured the feel of the Wonderland books very well. It was quite a surprise to me that so many of the tasks are the same as when I ventured upon Wonderland a few years back. Somehow I'd got the idea that much of it had been changed. As it is, however, it allows me to see how you have responded to the same questions and my overall feeling is that you've been much more personal in your writing than I was. I always kept myself one step removed from the action by referring to myself as the author, whereas you are in there reacting with the characters much more closely. I like your approach as it gives a more immediate sense to your stories and poems.

I can see, too, that you are improving with each task, gaining in confidence and allowing your imagination to take you further. It's all good stuff. Both Lornda and Kiya are giving you excellent advice as well - you're in very good hands, you know. *Smile*
Beholden - Thanks so much for the insightful feedback.

Yes, I was rather taken by surprise at how intense the Pool of Tears got there. (It was/is sort of embarrassing.) But hey, it's not the first time I've cried while writing, although I don't think that was Wonderland's actual aim. Ha. I'm lad that bit is behind me!

You warned me it was demanding; I did not appreciate quite how much so. Super pleased if you can see improvement happening - I am way to close to it for any pererspective yet.

Thank you thank you thank you for visiting me.


My biggest realisation so far is that 'Books can be lonely'
I've added a new entry to my blog, "Toe in the Water:
         "Gunter Grass


This one's very different.
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I generally don't like war fiction, but I think I'll be looking into The Tin Drum. Thanks!
I've added a new entry to my blog, "Toe in the Water:
         "A Little About Portal


This is a strange one.
I've added a new entry to my blog, "Toe in the Water:
         "Apocalypse Now


I still say it's funny.
I've added a new entry to my blog, "Toe in the Water:
         "Roar


Another silly thought.
I've added a new entry to my blog, "Toe in the Water:
         "In Any Other Tongue


More dredgings from the deeps.
I've added a new entry to my collection of "Eight-line Poems:
         "A June Croon


No, today's not my birthday. This was just to annoy you.
I've added a new entry to my blog, "Toe in the Water:
         "Rhyme Time


Well, it needed saying.
Edited
Hey, everyone! Look, an eagle!

Oh dear, a cNote from a secret admirer! What shall I do? I am at a loss. Perhaps if I send a secret thank you via the Newsfeed. Hardly anyone will read it so that's almost secret, isn't it? Anyway, it'll have to do...
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Hope Wondering - Who knows, Hope? It's all very secret and hush hush.
Beholden - It must have worked since we didn't realize it was the secret thank you. Well done!
I was too busy looking for the eagle to notice.
I've added a new entry to my blog, "Toe in the Water:
         "Morbid Alert


Lovely day, ain't it?
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Dead right! *Bigsmile*
It is a lovely day, almost like spring.
I don't think about Death as much as I try to imagine Heaven. So yeah, that's fun.
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