I am sure every sensible or thinking mind will have reflections as mentioned in the essay sometime or the other. The simple English used in the prose has made it interesting philosophical piece. It raises questions regarding purpose of life but no answers are given.
But don't you think Mr Jacko, that in spite of the realization of this void or no purpose situation, all of us continue to struggle for life, struggle for betterment of self and others who are near and dear to us. From where this power of perseverance ( i will call it life force) is originating ?
The sweet feelings are expressed in few words effectively. Yes, it helps to inspire readers who have gone through such romantic experience. Nice little story.
The poem depicts a dimension for the study of history. That is the sense of visualizing events or characters that we have never seen in our real life, but surely those existed in the past. I enjoyed reading the poem and the thought is a memorable one. I am not clear about the meaning the last line intends to convey - whether its comparison between myth and lying or comparison between truth and lying.
Simple but memorable event described nicely. Reader can relate this with his own experience due to simple language making the event live in front of reader's eyes
The character of the story is moving out of a house she has lived in for many years. It also includes the feelings associated with separation. Its thought provoking story on relationship and it describes the moment vividly. Reader is able to experience the feelings of the moment.
Nice romantic poem. I enjoyed reading it, particularly the sentence- I’m sad but happy because ...
The poem depicts the state of mind of the lover in few words. The mind is preoccupied by thw thoughts of the soul mate and hence them you miss a lot of things in day to day works ....
Yes, all of us keep on selecting choices every now and then. The power of choice is tremendous. You have presented this point with clarity but in few words. Its thought provoking and I hope it will provide direction to many of young readers. At times we are constrained to take decision that actually is not our first choice. At times we have to be bold enough to implement our choices if the same are against the tradition. These are the challenges...
It appears almost like a real story in certain schools but naturally can not be generalized. It stops at describing the experience, leaving it to readers to guess what the young teacher ought to do next day. Its scary and talk about society influence on education. I personally felt it would have been more complete, it the author gives some hint about what course the situation has taken. Overall good piece of a short story.
It is a nice fantasy told in a lucid style and simple language. Although its known idea of dwarfs used in many old stories, I enjoyed reading this one. The satire is present under the cover of comedy. The nicknames for the characters are funny. The problems encountered by dwarfs or micro bodies like this are depicted subtly.
how can I edit a static item that I have posted. I have posted a short story and now feel like changing a line or tow or correct a typo. error. how do i do that ?
Nice short poem. I liked it as it is thought provoking. We come across many situations where we ask the question but actually know that there is no answer. but can't avoid the temptation to ask the question. In the poem may be he will feel less guilty if she would have answered that she liked him with what he was had he not pretended...
It is a poem with simple words easy to understand. I liked the descriptive form used in the poem though it may not be the exactly desirable form for the poetry. The message coming out of the poem is logical and appears to backed by scientific reasons related to interaction of man with other animals in the nature. Interestingly we fail to notice it in the city life...we take things like electricity and other comforts for granted. Thought provoking poem. Good work.
Nice story penned in few words. You are able to project the feelings of protagonist quite clearly. The confused state of mind, the desire having something and feeling guilt in some corner of your heart silently. You have said in the last line it is the mind of someone delusional. I am not sure whether delusional is right word because for that person the feeling are real.
Nice poem describing symbolically the thunderstorm in the outside world as the status of human mind, as I understand it. Liked the phrase "Time has no beginning or end
Hell is what you're going through". Also the end is beautiful assuring dawn after the dark night. Simple words, depth in the meaning. I enjoyed reading it.
What are you going to do - when there is nothing that you can do? the sentence sums up the helplessness of the situation. But I did not really understand the end. Shall be grateful if the author could share his idea. Thanks.
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