It a short story well written. It delivers the intended message quite directly. I do not know the origin or the region from where it comes but appears like a traditional wisdom story for children.
The poem ends on an optimistic note. The theme of not cursing self and looking for positives in difficult situations is brought out nicely in the poem. It's a god read and I enjoyed it.
It is a very short story that conveys the message. The Internet world and particularly the social media creates illusion. The character of the story is painted in very few words. I like the last line and it is the punch line of the story. Contests like this having limitation on word count are interesting and brings best from the author.
The poem in free form makes reader think about the fears differently. Bright use of language in this meaningful poem. I appreciate the thought that fear is part of one's being. It is impossible to be fearless but at the same time excessive fears affect health dangerously. I find few lines repetitive, but overall good reading experience.
The story is humorous and the incident is nicely described. Reader can feel the incident - the aftermath of a failed Halloween party. The emotions of the boy and his mother are painted brightly. I could not exactly appreciate the meaning behind the title of the story- "The slightest clue". Overall good reading experience.
Good horror story with a mix of mythology. Probably it will be good idea to add explanatory foot note about the goddess. The end of the story appears to me to be incomplete.
Its a good horror short story. It gradually increases the anxiety of reader to know further. I felt that the story is sort of incomplete. Overall good effect..
Nice poem. I liked the line "No hole would be there
If you had not formed it" We are blessed with many positives in our life but have a tendency to complain when we lose one of them. Lets be thankful for what we good we have got.
I felt like reliving my own experience about computers. However, in my case, I could use the PC when I was 16. Nice article and today it has literally become part of life.
The article gives an unusual perspective on death. It makes its point quite obvious, worth pondering upon. I will like to share that a man who has come closer to death but was saves - for example a man who suddenly suffered heart attack, taken to hospital quickly and survives through angioplasty can tell how he felt when he was in ambulance being taken to hospital or how a victim of a road accident felt when he survives after a multiple surgeries in short time. At one point of time, man will come close acceptance of death and that moment he will feel relaxed as well.
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