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Review of Majestic poem 1  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
The given title is captivating and very interesting
Majestic Poem
A Triolet form of poetry
Reading between the lines makes me understand fully and clearly why such title was given
Well..
Majestic as it is..
I truly enjoy reading this all the way.
Brilliant
Write on.
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Review of Am I Mistaken  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A deeply emotional piece.

A free verse poetry that expresses some disappointment in a relationship and the pain of betrayal.
A very sad situation
The poem has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
The rhythm and rhyme is wonderful.
Reading at the last lines I agree with the wise decision.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Trees  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
I love the given title
Trees
Simply because I love trees.
They play a very special part in my life especially those childhood nemories with them as our housw was surrounded by trees.
This poem is great as I learn some new words from reading it.
Interesting actually.
Thank You for sharing and for the read
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Review of The Journey  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
An interesting free verse poetry with a captivating title
The Journey
Very true, life is an adventure and life in all its form is worth living.
The vision is clear
Enjoy the Journey.
Thank You for sharing this well written and nicely presented form of art.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A short story that is full of excitement and pure joy.
This is well written and nicely presented.
It is great to know that all the while the feeling is. Mutual.
In this world the best thing that ever happened to a person is to love and be loved.
Keep loving and be very happy.
Write on
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
I like Cross word puzzle. It is one way of improving my knowledge in many aspects.
Also like a sort of information about a particular topic.
This one is very interesting.
Thank You for sharing and the opportunity for me to read this
Popular Word Search By Request
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A nicely written Essay by a young writer as he moves on with life for a brighter tomorrow.
I admire your positive disposition jn life that surely makes you gain a lot of Victories in your wonderful Journey.
Yes Always believe in your ability to create the life you desire and you well deserved.
For you and in you...
Possibilities are endless.
God bless you all the way.
Write on.
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Review of Love Vs. Hate  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
Love overrules in life as I read between the lines it makes me feel sad for people who lives life with hatred in their hearts.
Life is too short to hold on tothe very thing which keeps from love and hope
Why cling to pain.
Move forward with Love. Thank you for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Everyday  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A very interesting title of a Free verse poetry.
Everyday
The chosen lines fit for the given title.
A poem with great faith to the Most High.
Yes
Everday offers endless possibilities. As Everyday is a Miracle.
Thank You for sharing and for the read
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Nice..
Truly Nice.
A free verse poetry that expresses the many facets of life in its own little way.
Truthful and observant.
The presentation is Wonderful while the poem is meaningful.
Thank You for sharing
Bits Of This and That
Write on.
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Review of In His Time  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A very inspiring piece about your deepest faith and trust to the
Most High.
Very meaningful and shared joy to my heart reading thi
I love the given title
In His Time
Which reminds me of a beautiful song of
Don Moen with the same title.
In His Time
He makes all things beautiful
In His Time
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
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Review of Let Go  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
I love the given title which expresses great positiveness.
This sounds like a very inspiring prose.
Highly admirable especially the comclusion
Wise and Nice.
Yes . Learn to let go, let live, let love and let God.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on
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Review of October 23 Letter  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A very interesting and inspiring letter to oneself.
A lettee that serves as a goal to be reached and a dream to be realized.
Nicely written and direct to the point.
Good Luck and God Bless in all your undertakings.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry written for a prompt ?
It is nice and uniquely described in a wonderful poetic lines that completed this work of art.
Precious as it is
A Lifetime Companion
I admire each line that completed this poetry
Special creativeness.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry that expresses a philosophical message from the depthness of poetic thoughts,
It speaks of sports and other aspects of harmonious living.
The poem has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
The conclusion is Great.
Write on.
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Review of Tail Chasing  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A very short story. For 21 word s it is not that easy to make a story
However, you did it and it is brilliant.
I prefer the story number two
that is more nicer in presentation to me.
Thank You for sharing this great talent.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A letter.
A recipe.
A vety precious letter from a brother to a dearest sister.
Awesome letter with much Love and care.
I love the recipe.
Reading it makes me feel hungry as this sounds very delicious and nutritious as well.
Thank You for sharing this
Write on.
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Review of Gallery  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
The title is captivating as it is also another form of art
that fascinates many people.
Reading between the lines I can vividly picture a big place full of statues and many more items that the gallery displays.
Written with all candidness and truthfulness.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A very meaningful title
Raining Days Never Last
It speaks of the actual rain that falls as well as of a philosophical message about life done in the finest words of poetry.
Highly impressive .
The last line exoresses great Hope for a brighter tomorrow.
I agree.
Write on.
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Review of Snake skin  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
The talented poet that you are is sharing this very interesting poetry with a captivating title of this poetry.
Snake Skin
Descriptive and direct to the point.
I admire the creativeness.
Nice in its unique way.
Thank You for sharing
Write on.
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Review of 1117  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
Intriguing title and very interesting too.
1117
A Code Name
Something to hide or this is about Secrecy but you do not Agree
So you must resist with all your
Might
Do not surrender..
Yes..
The story in this poetry is full of drama yet so worth reading too.
Write on my
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Review of Seasons Change  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
Nicely written free verse poetry with an interesting title

Seasons Change

Written for a prompt

Nice and wise

Descriptive about the seasons in your country .
The chosen lines fit for the given title.
" Now I want patiently for the snow"

My favorite line in this wonderful work of art.
Thank You for the Great read.
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Review of The Heir  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,

Fascinating Poem
Surrounded with the whole Family and the recepient of all their Love thus makes the perfect heir.
Nice and wise amusing lines that completed this work of art.
The poem has a good flow and the be rhythm and rhyme is wonderful.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
AMEN.
A very beautiful and meaningful prayer from the heart especially written from a son to his Dearest Mother.
You are blessed to have a loving and compassionate mother and at the same time she is bc also blessed to have a son who respects, honors and prays for her whole being.
A mother and son Bond that lives beyond forever.
This reminds me of our Mama who told my three younger brothers when we were teenagers... " Wherever you are, my love and prayers are with you..
And my brothers replied:
We Love you MAMA beyond forever.
That was her birthday and my brothers sang a song to her in our family program.
This letter reminds me of such precious and special time thst can never ever be forgotten.
I believe that you are enjoying a most fulfilling life..
WriterRick...
All because of the be Love, Honor and Respect you have for your Mother.
I am happy for you.
God Bless You all the way.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A very captivating title of a free verse poetry
Party Of The Century

I agree.
The poem has a good flow and is well written
The presentation is uniquely beautiful in own precious way.
A party so full of life.
The lines fit for the given title.
A party so full of life.
Write on.
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