Good Morning,
What a shoe and such a destructive one.
So unfortunate that it hits the cake.
The poem is with a good flow.
It is well written and nicely presented
The story behind the poetry is sad yet so amusing that ut happened that way.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
Good Morning,
Sister or Sisters they. Are God's great blessing and I am grateful to have three sisters and they are my best friends forever.
My favorite lines :-
"Sisters shared
Whisper's exchanged
Sisterhood passed
Sisterhood passed from ear to ear "
Thank you for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on
Good Morning,
A very beautiful Love Poetry.
I admire the given title Take My Hand
It shares great comfort as well as an assurance that with me..You are safe and welll- loved.
A poem that conveys a great message of true Love telling
I am yours for whole lifw through.
Great ..
Thank You for sharing
Write on.
Good Morning,
The title is captivating as in makes me very curious on what is this poetry all about
This is nice work of art that expresses your personal thoughts about Poetry
The last two lines are my favorite lines
" let's celebrate together
here's a poem for you."
Thank You.
Cheers !
Good Afternoon,
A very nice picture.
I love watching the mesmerizing sunset. I always find time to be at the beachfront to enjoy watching it.
So many people are usually there to watch it too
This one is in North Dakota while I watch it here in the Philippines.
Thank You for sharing.
Sad to note that it is the end of a relationship. I believe so.
Or ir could be the end of sadness and both will start all over again.
A free verse poetry that expresses a situation between a man and a woman with an intriguing title.
Thank You for the read.
Good Afternoon,
A Dutch Tanka form of poetry.
Thank you for the Note below the poem that gives me more understanding of this well written and nicely presented Love poetry.
The questioning title
Because You Love Me ?
The written lines fit for the given title where in the conclusion also clarifies through a question.
Nicely written and nicely presented too.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A well written free verse poetry that is with connectedness to a Biblical story about Adam and Eve..more on about Eve, I called her.. the first mother.
The poem speaks most when she was tempted to ear the friit wherein she actually did and for me there is slways a good reason for everything.
Truly a great read
Good Afternoon,
A very interesting as well as a brilliant Essay.
Yes.. time is money and very true Money is Power
I agree with these very important lines.
This is well written all the way.
This shares great wisdom to one and all. Highly impressive..
For me...
Time and Money are my best friends.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The title sounds like a happy song to me.Lala Dee Lala Doe
Interesting yet a sad story behind the poetry.
Of all that is happening..the heart says nothing more important and precious than these four words
I Still Love You
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
A very interesting as well as a very intriguing title of a free verse poetry
WHY ?
The questioning heart that needs answers for the many Why ? in life...
The poem has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
Surely sooner or later the answers will be given, either in details or the shortest way.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
And because of that
Accident happened.
Sad story behind this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
The given title is sad by itself
Accidental death from fallint boulder..
Horrible and terrible cause of death
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The story behind the poetry is interesting asin a day in a.life of a cat.
Great observations about this precious Cat.
The lines at the last stanza are my favorite lines.
The poem has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
So full of life ,
Write on.
Good Morning,
Nice way to make your day and it is by writing poetry.
Wow..I love the given title
A Poem A Day
The great result of doing it makes me
Smile and so happy for you.
I agree with the written lines that completed this work of art.
Fascinating all the way.
Write on.
Good Morning,
I admire this free verse poetry with a good flow.
It expresses the present weather condition of the Philippines, a country where I also belong and a country that I adore for the rest of my life.
Reading between the lines makes me smile as our garden is in color brown and no water in our faucet as we depend on water delivery by trucks to fill in our tanks.
The heat is at its utmost.
Yes.. we are praying for rain.
Thank You for sharing
I Can Smell The Rain
A poem that is well written and nicely presented as well as with wonderful rhtyhm and rhyme.
Good Morning from Cebu
Daghang Salamat...
God Bless
Good Morning,
Wonderful Cover art.
Congratulations for your Novella.and Congratulations for being a Published Author.
I am happy for You.
Nice and Unique color of a flower.
The Green Rose
Surely the book is very interesting to read.
Thank You for sharing .
Good Morning,
The poem is well written and nicely presented.
It speaks of oneself and the
Learnings as you go alone.
" Capable of right ane wrong
Learning as i go alone.
"
My favorite two lines that speaks of the truth and a wonderful way of expressing your very own life.
Thank You for sharing
Good Afternoon,
A very interesting short story.
The loving mother of Rebecca is doing the best action and dedication to talk nicely to her and it works.
The story has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
Mom's gentle and loving heart wins.
Great story.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Yes..Amen to that.
As in Let go, let live, let love, let God.
It is not easy but surely you can do it.
The poem that is very touching and is deeply emotional.
Anger is a part of living but not to let it control our lives.
Forgive and forget.
The poem is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
You do write wonderful poems with nice presentation and this is one of them.
Wonderful lines that completed this work of art.
The last two lines makes a great conclusion of this nice work of art.
Thank You for sharing
All Along My Own
Write on
Good Afternoon,
Wow..
Awesome..
This proves the Power of Love and what love can do to a person.
A wonderful story all the way.
Nicely written, nicely presented and truly impressive.
Diego and Isabella...are meant for each other.
Destiny brings them together.
I enjoy reading this.
Brilliant...
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Lamentations through a well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
Yes..writing uour deepest feelings makes a great release of all the pain and struggles we face as we continue this journey called life.
We learn and grow from experiences that push us a little further.
Be resilient.
For every effort you put in, God rewards you with strength .
Life is pure adventure and the soonest we realize that, the soonest we will be able to treat life as an art.
Keep writing and keep posting
God Bless You Always.
Good Afternoon ,
A fascinating title as Home is always a Home Sweet Home to.me where one can enter and exit with a joyful hesrt.
This well written and nicely presented free verse poetry has an important philosophical message.
It is being addressed to a very special friend.
Thank You for the read.
Good Afternoon,
Wishes...
This poem speaks of more wishes as the wish was already said or told.
Yes. The chosen lines speaks with all honesty and truthfulness and I can only wish that may all your wishes come true.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Wtite on.
Good Afternoon
A heavy drama story behind the poetry.
I love the happy ending.
Yes..in life if choice or decision has to be made we need to remember that right is right.
Wrong is wrong..
So, why move wrongly...
In this free verse poetry, the main character faces a dilemma yet brilliant mind prevails and ovorpowered the mixed emotions with love.
Highly impressive work of art.
Thank You for sharing
Choice Unveiled..
Write on.
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/akomagsusulat/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/8
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.93 seconds at 9:15pm on May 19, 2024 via server web2.
View Portfolio
Visit Notebook
Send Gift Points
Awards
Badges
Send Email
Community Newsfeed
General Discussion
Sponsored Items
Book of Trinkets
Static Items
Books
Groups
Interactive Stories
Audio
Campfire Creatives
Community Notes
Crossword Puzzles
Documents
Folders
Images
In & Outs
Madlibs
Photo Albums
Polls
Product Reviews
Quizzes
Survey Forms
Web Pages
Word Searches
