A nice silent poem of the melancholy of the past. And about a strong woman who never gives up the good. Thanks for creating a wonderful poem and a kind of peaceful small world, even if there is the storm of a kind of war outside. This work touches deep inside. Keep on the good writing... Anna
Wonderful captured picture of spring. These colors are, what painters need to paint a picture, what a poet needs to write a peace, what lovers needs to show the world, what emotions need to grow. Spring, one of the favorite times of the year for me. Thanks for let us have a sneak into your backyard during such a wonderful time... Anna
This is a nice peace and tells us much about, what we can learn when we watch others. And it was a wonderful description about a wonderful day. The best things happen to us when we don´t expect them. That´s life me thinks. Good work, go on like that.... Anna
This is just wonderful. It is always good to put yourself into question, but if she wants to go to the darker side of life, you can´t protect her if you leave her. You can protect her, if you tell her what you see and if you leave her, she might find someone else and that might be more worse as this one is not that kind to her. You can only protect her with NOT leaving her. So stay and don´t leave the angel of your life alone. Good work.... Anna
Yes, that is the spirit of love. The perfect poem for the spring hormones
You know that this will happen soon as the sun spreads its beams completly and warm all over the most parts of the world. God and solid work, well done, go on with that and be sure I will read more of you... Anna
My condolence, that is really sad. But you put a fantastic memory for your friend. I mean, what to do, what to say, to put things in the right measure. I am always speechless in situations like that. No word in the world can bring that beloved person back and no tear can make the pain less painfull. I hope you can laugh about the fun you both had and smile about the little secrets you both shared soon...... xoxoxoxox Anna
Do you know me? I mean, how can you write down my thoughts
This is a very, very good work, if not a masterpiece.
It´s a work for the thinkers, for the people who enjoy life, but don´t forget what will be in the end.
We can escape many things in life, but we can´t escape the death. So, some of us think how to fill up the time between "to be born and going to die" with some expedient things and you putted them very well.
Good work, I love it.... Anna
This is so sad, and so wonderful written. I like the way you descibed the moon. It sounds so peaceful, but to far away for the people who are left behind. It gives and impression how far a moon can be and how close he looks. This is a very heartful sad poem. I wish I could say something consoling. I just can give a virtual hug and sometimes it is good to silent.... Anna
I am deep impressed. It has a rythm that you can hear music in it. And it has a truth, that scares me a bit. And it makes me happy. I also like that is is not only positive and not only negative. It is full of hope and full of believing in yourself. Thank you for sharing it and sorry, that it took me so long to have a view on them, but I was to busy over the last days and didn´t want to throw my words mindlessly on a valuable poem like that..... Anna
Oh, wow, not what I expected, when I opened this writing. What a heart bleeding short story. What a big love they both share. Oh, wow, what is her decision after that? Living still, without him? Or following him soon? Thank you, for showing, that real love sometimes mean to let someone go. Oh, wow, still impressed. Anna
This is so wonderful. I really can imagine you both kids walking the streets of New York and get lost inbetween all those freaks. How could you´ve had known? Good that it turned into a good end. I think after that day you both where really kind of grown up, right? Thanks for sharing this story, was a wonderful read. read more of you soon, greetings, Anna
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