A very good read. Very unexpected. I really can't say what I expected, but it was not what I read. I really enjoy such surprises. It is very well written and it gives me the feeling to look into something I will only find out, when I'm not able to tell anyone.
Go on with the good writing.
anna
Applause!
That was a fun and good read.
I enjoyed it a lot to go to that irish tale word by word and I tend to believe it might be true.
I´ve to admit, that I´m a bit fan of irish tales and so this short story had my fully attention from beginning to end.
Keep up the good work
This is a perfect place for every writer.
It makes me very proud to be part of it and so I just can say, that it is worth more than 5.0 stars.
A double 5.0 comes closer to the truth.
The Storymistrees and the Storymaster are doing a fantastic job here. Just needed to say that
Very good read and I bet many of us can relate to it. Well, I can.
I always felt like I was a nothing and unimportant until I met that person who made me feel that that, what I am is the best thing, that happened to me.
Sometimes it is still hard to believe, but I think, my little poem "In your eyes" says exactly the same. ( I don´t link it here, as I don´t want to make a shameless self promotion here).
But, be sure, I know exactly, what are you talking about here.
And, you put it in a great way.
So, keep up the good work and keep on writing.
RAOK is a wonderful community in the writing.com community who is helping so many members already, that it is just a good thing to join the brigade.
Thanks, that this group does exist.
A nice and funny little poem.
I just can see that little rabbit hopping around and find out what´s going on in the world.
You put it in a nicely and funny way, just like bunnies are. Sweet and curious and hard to restrain. So full of searching for the fun adventures.
Liked it.
Keep up the good work... anna
Donnie can be a very proud person now. Fingers crossed that you will get the chance to tell him that.
Yes, sometimes life holds a mirror and we look straight into our evilst enemies eyes. Our eyes!
We have to learn to make our enemy is our friend. We just have to accept him/her and take him/her into our arms.
The only way to escape and to survive.
Keep up the really good work... anna
You and running out of ideas?
NEVER!!!!
What I read here is, that you are so full of ideas and able to write so many different things, that I just can be impressed.
Again you throw out an emotion, we all know so well and we all can relate to.
Thanks again for a wonderful read.
Keep on writing... anna
This is really cute. I loved it.
What comes out of a kids mouth is just amazing.
How old is little Hannah?
The simplicity is so wonderful.
It is round and why to say something complicated like tomatoe if you can easily say apple.
Hope you come up with more stories like that.
Keep on writing... anna
I´m not sure, if I really understood, what you have written here, but somehow I am fascinated.
I don´t know, what exactly it is.
I can feel the deep meaning and it really hook me.
I understand the beginning and the end, but in the middle part I am a bit lost.
Anyway, I really like it and maybe you explain it a bit to me (could be the language barrier, that I don´t get the complete meaning)
You made me read it over and over and still, I could read it again and again, without being bored.
Thank you.
Keep on writing... anna
This is a big chance for writers, who write short stories or make short movies.
I will send the link to a producer I "know" and maybe he is interested (don´t know, how busy he is or if he pays attention to this link, but it will be a chance)
I will see, if I find time for reviews and maybe I am able to add a short story aswell (I fear, if I write a short story I need some help with re-reading and correction as I am from germany and my english isn´t that perfect, but anyway, maybe I have an idea or the time for an idea )
I will bookmark your link and promise you, that I will come back on it as soon as possible.
Thanks for these chances and I hope many people will see it the same way.
Keep on writing and all the other stuff you are doing... anna
You are the one for the right questions. As always I enjoyed this poem again big time.
You have a special feeling for composing a poem. It not only looks good, it even makes sense in a way everybody can understand, without being simple.
You know, how much I enjoy to read you stuff.
Keep on writing... anna
To relate life to a common meaning about woman, man and kids behaviour is a great idea.
I loved reading it. I enjoyed it a lot.
It is fantastic written and I like the rythm of the verses.
And, I hope, the man never oversleeps.
Interesting style. Not, what I thought it would be, but that doesn´t mean, it is bad. No, not at all. More the other way around.
I so can imagine, someone sitting close to a candle to get the small flame of light and to see, what he/she is writing down.
Good idea and an interesting read. Thank you.
Keep on writing... anna
This is a very good story. Funny in the beginning and thrilling in the end.
I so enjoyed reading it. As it counts for all the good stories I´ve read here before, I will not let too much out and will not tell everybody what´s written in it as I think, more people have to read it and it would be half the fun, if they know already too much about the story.
Anyway, a fantastic and enjoyable read. Hope many, many will read it here as a story like this deserves it.
Keep on writing... anna
Fantastic thoughts are running free here. I enjoyed reading it and found myself in there really good. I always sit down and reflect over my past and future. The good and the bad, you can´t have one without the other. You can always find something good in a bad experience. At least,you kow one good thing, you survived.
And, if you think to close, you will find something bad in a good memory. If you just try hard enough. But, why should someone want to do this
Really a good put. Made me think about some things again.
Keep on writing... anna
Yes, home is where your heart is. And your heart is where your love is. And, soulmates find each other everywhere if they found each other once.
Very good put here. Short, but that makes it so great.
Go on like that, I really like it.
Trust your heart and trust the one who holds your heart.
Keep up the good work...anna
You put exactly how I feel about the reviews.
I review a lot by myself and I see my work reviewed by others.
I always try to review it different and choose different words as good as I can, but sometimes I just have the same words for very different poems and stuff.
I think, everybody who is brave enough to put a peace of him/herself up here needs nothing else than clapping hands and a big cheer.
But, than again, I like the reviews, which are a bit critical. Even if I don´t take every advice I learned a lot and still learn a lot.
I, for myself, am better with kind and nice words and as my english is not my native language I try to stay away from correcting people, but, I am really open for people who correct me. Ok, ok, one or the other time I have to swallow a bit and take a deep breathe. And sometimes I need a night of sleep over a review, but, who am I to think, that everybody loves what I write, even I love it with every drop of my hearts produced blood.
If I am afraid about critics, I can´t publish it on a website.
Just my way of thinking.
You put it really good here (repeating again )and I´m very happy that someoe spoke out loud what I sometimes think.
Keep on writing and keep up the work here on the site.
We live and breathe thru our words, that´s what a writers heart is made of...
anna
That´s why I never have any pets. As much as I would love to have a little (or bigger) dog. But, with the way I live my life it just would be unfair to them.
I travel a lot and I work a lot and so it wouldn´t be good for that pet.
It´s always hard to travel with pets. Stress for them, stress for you. But I think for some circumstances we have to travel with them, if we have them.
You did a good job on them, but I bet, you would avoid to do that again, right?
You described it wonderful and I so was able to feel with you.
Keep on writing... anna
I like how the poem turns in the end. Hopeless in the beginning and full of trust and faith in the end. This poem can bring hope to many, many people and so I hope many, many people will read it.
You´ve written it in an excellent way and I think this is a piece that needs attention.
Keep on writing... anna
I think I can feel the rythm of this lyric and I think I can imagine what kind of music will be played with this song.
I think I can hear some fast guitar in the beginning, getting slower while the chorus.
The staring eyes[/i] have a more stakkato half beat rythm and after that you´ve space for a nice piano solo.
Sorry for making my own melody with this. But, this is the rythm I got from this lyrics.
Keep on writing... anna
These are beautiful thoughts coming from a wonderful sensitive soul. I enjoyed it very much. While reading it I felt the heart blood dropping in with every single letter and this means a lot. This is just poetic. Congrats for this angel. An angel of words.
Keep up the good work... anna
Uuuhhhh, a tragic and unexpected ending. It starts so beautiful and than...
With every line this poem change and that makes it very special. When I hear sunset, I think about beautiful warm colors. And not about an ending. But, just because I didn´t thought about it it doesn´t mean it someone else will not think like that.
It is fantastic written and fingers crossed for you. I hope you will win.
Keep on writing... anna
Really beautiful. Finding something totally unexpected on an ordinary day.
It´s like a lotto winning or, the moment you find love.
Nothing you can wait for, but something that CAN happen.
You put a moment like this very good and I enjoyed reading it.
Keep on writing... anna
What a beautiful picture you are painting here. With the colors of the nature it is just amazing. You painted the rain in an animated picture, which make you feel comfortable and home. It just feels like a wonderful welcome for the change of the seasons. I really adore poems like that. Fantastic work.
Keep on writing... anna
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