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Review by joey
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
A remarkable story. Very well done.

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Review by joey
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
No, this is not right, and I am writing to the addresses you provided.

Joey
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Review of Gordon  
Review by joey
Rated: E | (5.0)
You are to be commended to be such a thoughtful person to do what you did. I am an animal lover myself, and have rescued pets from animal shelters. Thank you for being so kind.
Joey
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Review by joey
Rated: E | (5.0)
Yes, this story rates a 5.0. What started as an unhappy beginning, turned out to be a happy one. Please continue with your stories. You do have talent, and I wish to read more of them. Thank you,

Joe
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Review of Reality Check  
Review by joey
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very nice little poem. I think that I would still be your friend, because of the way You've written it.

Joey
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Review by joey
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I rated you a 5, because that's the way I felt of your story. I remember the babe well, as I was born only a year later in 1919. I remember the Babe playing right field for the Yankees. I don't know if anyone noticed his habit of always touching 2nd base on the way home or out in the field. I thought your story was wonderful. It brought back memories, such as when I played hookey from school in 1930 or so, sitting in the bleachers for 55 cents, I think.

I shall always remember the Babino, and all the rest, the great Gehrig, Dicky, Chapman, Rizzuto, Twinkle Toes Selkirk, Whitey Ford, and the rest of the great boys.
Thank you for the story

Joey
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Review by joey
Rated: E | (4.0)
Thank you for a beautiful story.
joey
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Review of Back On When  
Review by joey
Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautifully written. You are not old. When I was your age, I felt that life was just beginning. I am 85 now, and couldn't be more happier. I lost my wonderful wife 5 years ago, and for 4 years I felt as you. Life was miserable, sad, lonely. Then I met a wonderful woman, who has enriched my life. She cannot replace my deceased wife for I'll never forget her and the love we had. But I have love now. I am miserable no more, I am happy, and feel young again.
Thank you.
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Review by joey
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I loved your story. It shows a lot of imagination and talent. Please keep it up. I would like for you to read one of my story. I hope you like it.

joey








A Bedtime Story at The Black Rose Ranch





Once upon a time ago there were 7 dogs and 2 cats. Four of the dogs and the cats lived in the house with their owner. The other three dogs lived outside because they prefered to. Once in a while the owner let them in for a few minutes to reaquaint them with the other animals. Then out they went because they were happier out there.

The dogs who lived inside were Colly, a 16 year old female Boxer. Charlie, a female Beagle. Gloria, a 6 month old female Catahula, who thought she was a pug, and Bobo, a two and a half year old female Pug, who thought she was a Catahoula. Gloria was so large at 6 months that when she sprawled lengthwise on the couch, her paws and head touched either end. Bobo, however, at only 17 pounds, and one quarter the size of Gloria, was a terror, having learned the ways of the extremely intelligent, and aggressive ways of Gloria. But they were inseparable. There was never a peacful moment in the house whenever Gloria and Bobo were there. Either playfighting, playing or tormenting the other two dogs and sometimes the owner. Yet they were lovable. Bobo, whenever chance she had would jump upon her masters lap, and ask to either be petted or played with. Gloria, tried this but was not too successful. She’d get halfway upon a lap, but would fit no further.


Colly, the old boxer, was, in her heyday quite a fine example of a beautiful dog, shiny brown and tan coat, playful, and a loyal pet. Now, at nearly 17 years of age, she no longer had the same agility. However, although she was burdened with arthritis, deaf, and a number of other ails, she never the less, was the same loyal dog that she was many years ago.


Charlie, the beagle, and the favorite of the owner, was a grumpy and spoiled, seldom playing with the other dogs, she however tolerated them, and they did the same. It was known that Charlie’s former owner beat her and treated her mercilessly, thus she was frightened of strangers untill she got to know them better


Bear, a huge two and a half year old monster of a catahoula was the leader of the outside pack, which consists of his twin sister Elizabeth, and a 17 year old female golden retriever. All these dogs were docile during the daylight hours, greeting all strangers with tails wagging, and begging for any petting that was offered. The was no hint of a mean streak in any of their bodies, during the daytime. But, it was not the same at night, where the dogs would probably turn into killers of anyone who dared to enter their domain without persmission.


Cinderella, was a 17 year old Tortoise Shell, shy, but in wonderful shape for her age. Thimble a young black and white bobtail manx, beautiful cat, was a bit more aggressive. All the dogs tolerated the cats and the cats tolerated all the dogs, except for one, Colly, the boxer. She didn’t like, or maybe didn’t understand what a cat was. Never seen one until she moved to this location. So maybe? The cats and the dogs, except for Colly occasionally played with each other and slept near one other, but not Colly, The cats would have to sneak around and make sure the way was clear if they wanted to go from one room to another or just do some exploring. Bobo and the cats never fought each other. It was simply a matter of a hiss or a growl, and thats the way it was.






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Review by joey
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Nice work, Beth. Your story is beautiful. You have more love and faith in one finger that I could possibly have in my hand. Yes, you have found God, and I have too, but not as much as you, but I'm still looking.

I can't comment on your spelling or sentence structure or the like, as mine is astrocious. Thank you again.

Joey
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Review of Crumbled  
Review by joey
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A truely captivating story. I know that it happens and I can only surmise that it has happened. I cant comment on your sentence structure, spelling or things like that for I am lousy at that sort of thing. All I can say is that is seems to be from the heart and I thank you.

Joey
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Review by joey
Rated: E | (4.5)
Amen, this is so true. I remember my mom, as long as 70 years ago. She was always for me. I couldn't do anything wrong. She loved me with all her heart. There is so much to say about her. I cry as I read this. Thank you for writing such an intense article.
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Review of Daddy's Baby Girl  
Review by joey
Rated: E | (5.0)
I guess that I was guilty in a way also. So, your story touched me quite a bit. So all I can say, when a story, as short as it is, has a dramatic affect upon one, then it is good.
Joey
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Review of Mac Attack  
Review by joey
Rated: E | (4.0)
I've very often wanted to do this, but never had the nerve. One day, I'll probably go out and buy a Mac.
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Review of Second Chance  
Review by joey
Rated: E | (5.0)
I was sincerely touch with your story. It was interesting and kept me glued to the pages. I can offer no adverse comment whatsoever. Thank you

Joey
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