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Review of The Last Goodbye  
Review by bethie7950
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is good! Where are you going with it, a novel? I like it, can't wait to read more!!
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Review of Arachnophilia  
Review by bethie7950
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Great story! Well constructed, I enjoyed it.
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Review by bethie7950
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This was very riveting! I am hoping this is just a small part of a much bigger story. I found it descriptive and a great pace with just the right amount of suspense. Just one very minor suggestion (and this may just be me as I am not sure if it is grammatically correct): when they do catch her it says "The ground was the only thing she could still feel being drug across the pavement, back to them." It seems the ground is being drug not the woman. It is just does not feel right to me. I understand your meaning but I am not comfortable with the flow.
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