Beautifully done. I think that no matter one's faith, everyone can relate. Everyone questions. This is very beautiful, and very appropriate in such times of today. If this is your faith, hold dear to it. And I am sorry for what you all encounter on behalf of Religious Cleansing... :(
Tis beautiful. I'm not really a religious person, but this very touching. And even though not religious, it still could pertain to anyone and everyone. I love it! Thank you for this piece of work and a gift to everyone.
Honestly, I like what you are getting at with this prologue. However, the first paragraph seems...kind of repetitive is the only word I know to describe. It's not bad, but I guess part of it is that everyone uses the analogy of the 'rose' as nature's evil. It's true, but maybe there is something you could use. Maybe dig a little deeper into something that is just as beautiful if not more beautiful than a rose with the same possiblity of 'evil'. Other than that, I would love to read the book.
Bravo. Loved your 'teaser' very much. I for one love vampire novels, and so it's nice to see more of them that I enjoy and don't seem to be long and drawn out like Anne Rice, whom I love, but others I love more. You have a good storyline going. Can't wait to be able to read more of the characters and history. Nothing really negative to say except it isn't the whole shabam! :) Definitely love this story!
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