Amen ! Saving yourself is a good thing. I wasn't sure how dark this was going to be, but then I saw the faint light at the tunnel's end. Very well written, and very emotional. You baited me then trapped into feelings !
I thought that the voyage you took us on with Suzanne was very intimate and revealing. The plot captured me and brought me into her world for awhile, making me wonder just what emotions were waiting for her at the end. Very well written. Keep up the good work.
Stay Intellectual !
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