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Review of The Quilt Block  
Review by colorfulpoet
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I really liked your short story
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Review of Alone  
Review by colorfulpoet
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello, just so you understand how I rate poetry this my rubic and my rating is just the average.

/5 choice of wording (t flow nicely, does it sound awkward, powerful wording etc)
/5 spelling/grammar
/5 Does it paint a picture (can i understand/vision what your poem is trying to say, does it tell a story/message)
/5 Overall impression

Choice of wording 5/5 Great choice of wording, it has powerful wording. It flows really well. No awkwardness at all
Spelling/grammer: 5/5 No mistakes that I notice
Does it paint a picture: 5/5 This totally reminds me of dexter and it dark twisted ways
Overall impression: 4/5 It was well written but Im not a huge fan of dexter and this is totally what this poem reminds me of
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Review by colorfulpoet
Rated: E | (2.5)
Hello, just so you understand how I rate poetry this my rubic and my rating is just the average.

/5 choice of wording (t flow nicely, does it sound awkward, powerful wording etc)
/5 spelling/grammar
/5 Does it paint a picture (can i understand/vision what your poem is trying to say, does it tell a story/message)
/5 Overall impression

choice of wording: 2.5/5The first stanza to me seems awkward. The first three lines flow alright and then you write “a welcome mid the crags” It sounds off base. Again with the second stanza the first three lines really flow well and then the last three seem really out of place. The third stanza while not really showing any strong wording is the stanza that flows the best in the entire poem.

Spelling/grammer 3/5: Stanza 1 line 2 “i” should be “I”
Stanza 3 line 1 “i” should be “I”
Stanza 3 line 3 “skyscapes” should be too words sky scapes

Does it paint a picture: 2/5 I can't really picture what you are talking about. The lack of emotion in the poem is lacking.

Overall impression: 2/5 It has the means to be a powerful poem but it lacking, powerful wording, and emotion. Good luck
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Review by colorfulpoet
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Marching along with Death Row,
Soaked in sweat and blood.
Didn't put on a good show
Now we're working in the mud.
The drill sergeant's on my ass,
And I can't keep in step.
I didn't learn from the past
Still not a soldier yet.
March along 2 by 2,
So far away from home;
I have begun to feel so blue,
But I shall never roam.
Keep doing more and more,
Marching through the pain,
Doesn't matter if I get sore,
'Cause I know this is no game
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Review of Love Hurts  
Review by colorfulpoet
Rated: E | (3.0)
The first five lines are powerful, then you reach the sixth line "And they destroy the foundation". It just sounds out of placed. "So they destroy the foundation" The rest of the poem doesn't sound too bad.
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