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Review of Shadows  
Review by Xander
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is the only piece that I have ever graded a five on.Very good work.
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Review of Dark Vows  
Review by Xander
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
What i misunderstand is the point in this writing.Although impressive I felt a certain lack of reason.
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Review by Xander
Rated: E | (3.5)
First in and love are not spaced,this is a good piece at times it seems forceful but altogether well done.Thank you for your time.
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Review of Temptation  
Review by Xander
Rated: E | (2.0)
This is my rating only because you said this is a work in progress.Thank you for your time.
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Review of At Night...  
Review by Xander
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
You have potential,but you need to think over your writing to see if that is what you really want to see people read.
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Review of Little Children  
Review by Xander
Rated: E | (4.0)
Excellent job very good job this is an piece of literary genius,well done.
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Review of Revenge  
Review by Xander
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
Good but, this sounds like some of it is forced, let it come to you naturally.
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