Wow! You certainly have dramatically captured the essence of seeing all.
I have a vestibular condition and looking at this piece makes me spin. This is actually a compliment. You have reached your desired affect, at least with me.
No surprise here. Some folks just think they deserve everything the world has to offer no matter what it costs others.
The only way we could stop the madness called Hollywood would be to stop seeing movies and such until the actors are paid what they are actually worth and start behaving like civilized human beings.
I always enjoy a good crossword. So I missed five of them.
I am really intrigued with some of the clues. Fascinated and repulsed (by the info). Where did you do your research. I wouldn't think some of this info would be allowed out.
Okay, I don't know how I got to reading blogs, I thought I clicked on books. Oh, well! I am hear and have read.
Your first entry: Never a waste of time. I am here to learn from others work as much as to improve my own. When writing in a blog/journal we write our inner most thoughts. I find for me it is then that I really write from the heart. NO no worries.
Second entry: Your structure and grammar are fine. This is your space to write what you want. I have a blog off this site where I am a member for others with my medical illness. I rant, I rave, I jump for joy. Make yours what you want it to be and just have fun. By the way, where I live we have Lowest and Wal-Mart, but no Peter Piper.
Your third entry: I see what you are saying. Sometimes it is difficult to navigate. I have only been here a short time myself. I just keep coming back to explore more.
Thanks for sharing your talents. I look forward to reading your other work.
In regard to #4 - regarding what critical aspect I think makes a successful poem - I think heart does. Is the work coming from the heart or the head. It is possible to write a poem that has everything needed, but if it isn't from the heart it usually doesnt move me.
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