Elizabeth A. Rochel's (e.a.rochel) Reviews

Yikes! That's a very interesting way to look at the church and the father. I personally feel the father that looks at all these atrocities is saddened by them. He has given each and every one of his children the option should I do bad or good.

I'm sure glad I'm not the father because I would have ended each and every one of them that I thought was bad.

Ha, and then after the smoke has cleared there wouldn't' be anyone left on the planet.

Anywho don't get me on my soapbox. The writer did well in reflecting his/her neighbor's point of view. It was easy to read through and I was able to understand.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .

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Review of Displaced

Review by Elizabeth A. Rochel

Rated: E

| (4.0)

This was easy to read and to comprehend what was happening. I know how it is to have your office moved while your working and having to get work finished at the same time.

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Review of When insanity takes control (part one)

Review by Elizabeth A. Rochel

Rated: E

| (3.0)

Wow, good start to a good drama. I hope the tragedy hadn't occurred. I could be hooked into reading the next part, which is what you want a reader to feel, but there is one major problem the grammar needs much work. It makes it hard for the reader to read.

If the grammar was cleaned up I would come back and read it because the story is interesting.

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Review of This is a test, do not click it.

Review by Elizabeth A. Rochel

Rated: E

| (1.0)

I am not a fool.

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Review of Freedom's Eulogy

Review by Elizabeth A. Rochel

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Wow, heavy duty message here. I felt the force behind the letters. Especially so with the use of the word 'you' although I'm all for the message given here I felt like I was the one being scolded. I do realize that that's what was needed for people to get the message, I just didn't like the feeling.
I can tell the author has a great passion for the message and I do hope people will notice the tragic state of our education system.

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Review of Hereafter

Review by Elizabeth A. Rochel

Rated: E

| (5.0)

This was a cool poem. It flowed both ways and was easy to understand.
I liked it.