This was a wonderful read! Where did the right closing quotation marks go? Other than that I found no grammatical errors. You have a very well written piece here. I rejoice in the fact, "Magic" has not been totally lost, for it is "Magic" that brings imagination to life! Good Job!
This was an interesting word search. I can think of lots of other fall words you should add to this. I only played one round however, so I am not sure how many different words you have! Overall it was fun and entertaining to say the least. It helped me to relax, and think of the upcoming season.! Good Job!
Wow! This was one of the most amazing stories I have read on here! It does not seem like something such as this, could actually be too far fetched. It makes you wonder what is really possible. This story made me want to double check my faith in God, and stock up on supplies, and paper and pens...Wonderfully done! Good Job!
This piece is amazing! Well written. You have a gift, and you should write more. It made me want to cry, for I felt the sadness of Eve, this was a new perspective, told by her view. I enjoyed reading this story very much. Please keep me informed of any more of your writings. Good Job!
This was so cute! You had me laughing all the way through. Well written and from what I know of pirates this hit the mark. You have a true gift here, please continue to write. Do you have other writings as well? I would like to read them. I especially liked the "never grow old" line that is cute! Good Luck to you!
This is a very sad story. It is well written and I like the separate insert that seemed to fit the storyline.You said this was a true event? Bless your heart for having to witness and endure this awful catastrophe. You are a very strong soul. I do hope you continue to write, and may you be inspired by some Blessed events to write about.
I love your writing. You have definitely inspired me. I look forward to purchasing your book! Your attention to detail, and keeping me on the edge is praised greatly. I will also enjoy reading more of your other works. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading "The Falcon and His Desert Rose" and "The Book" and can not wait until they are available for purchase!
I am impressed! I have read the first chapter and will shortly read the next. This story is interesting, and had me on the edge of my seat. Very good Story, and well written!
Once again...You have written something that has captured my full attention! Very good work indeed. I am sitting on the edge of my seat....waiting for more!
I really enjoyed this story. You definitely have a gift! I can relate to this as I imagine others can too. The ending was good leaving a smile on my face. You should continue this story it would be great to see more adventures with these two. Very good storyline, and descriptive.
This was an awesome story! I enjoyed how descriptive it was. I would love to read more. You have a gift, thank you for sharing it with us, the readers. Please continue to write .
This had me from the start! You have a wonderful gift of drawing one in, and keeping hold. I would love to read more of your work. The ending was very unexpected, twisted. I enjoyed reading this piece. I did not see a lot of things you need to fix, it was well written. A very good story.
This was a very cute story. It does need some small fixes, and refinement, but overall I enjoyed it. You should definitely continue this story, for I am sure there are many more adventures for the King and his Queen! You do have a gift and should not fear writing more!
This has a very unique storyline. It was hard at first to get into, due to the few spelling and grammatical mistakes, but it has good potential. You should definitely continue this story, I would like to know how this story could play out. Please do keep writing, and enjoy your talent.
This is a good story of envy, pride,and jealousy. You did very well. There a just a few minor fixes needed, but the story is catching, and holds you all the way to the end. Are you going to perhaps write more of this? Maybe telling of what happens next?
The story is coming along nicely, please do keep writing it. It will be interesting to see the plot which is forming in Ellowyn's mind. There are some minor fixes needed, however the storyline and dialog are very good. I will patiently wait for the next chapter.
I enjoyed this tale of betrayal by demon! You should definitely continue to write more. I was skeptical at first, but you have a way of keeping the reader locked on the page. I wonder, how much about actual demonology you know. This piece was well written and entertaining! Good Job!
This was a good read, it took a bit to get into but after the first paragraph I was in. I can sort of relate to Jed's dilemma, myself having a psychic gift/curse. The story kept you wanting more. It could be a good book, or novella. I do encourage you to keep writing this. Please also keep me informed of any progress on this piece.
Wow! This story sounds almost like what actually did happen to someone I know! It was well written, and kept me on the edge of my seat! You definitely have a flair with your writing and I would recommend this piece to anyone! It is catchy and the ending, that leaves you hanging could easily be continued into a series of shorts, or a whole complete novel. I am impressed!
This captivated me, I indeed would like to read more of this, or your works. I have a fascination of Archangels, and wondered if you as well might. I encourage you to write more. You do have an incredible talent to draw one in, and make one think in a different manner. I wish you well on your journey of writing.
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