Not my most frequent interest, but it's an intriguing concept. I haven't explored this interactive very much so I'm not sure if there's a story-line like this but one of my favorite fantasies involving Amazon-ized women is if they get kind of megalomaniacal and decide to fatten their boyfriends up hugely.
Bowser is always a fun target for expansion, so I'm very happy to contribute to his increasing waistline. Looking forward to adding significantly to this interactive in the future. I've also always loved Mario and played all the older games so I'm happy to delve into the nostalgia aspect as well!
I always enjoy a good weight gain interactive and this one has lots of potential. Especially since it combines expansion and pokemon which are two of my favorite things.
This is a very pensive poem, puts me in the mindset of a quiet recollection from an older man trying to recall something peaceful or calm during a very troubled or dangerous time. Perhaps a lover now passed away or someone kind who he met while deployed.
Beautifully conveys gratitude and serenity. Repetition of the opening line at the close brings the poem through a satisfying cycle and drives the intent of the author home. You really get the sense of happiness and gratitude that it is meant to convey. Beautiful imagery.
Evocative imagery and well crafted meter. It flows very well and the author's use of physical sensations and other descriptors put the reader solidly into the mindset of the narrator. Beautifully written with unique choices in imagery, such as the beauty to sandpaper comparison which isn't a common simile. Thought provoking.
Many worlds/parallel reality/multiverse theory has always fascinated me, so I feel like I will love this story. I will have to check it out more thoroughly and I think I'll definitely want to make additions to it because this kind of metaphysics and sci-fi is right up my alley.
Saw the other Morphing and Magic story and am equally excited about this story. I'll be making sure to look into these interactives in the near future and I will hopefully be able to make additions to them! Very much love stories about high fantasy, magic and adventure!
Very interested in this story and others by the same author, I've seen some of the art commissions inspired by these stories around and they're excellent and wonderfully massive. I'll be watching this story closely and hope to read through it and make additions!
Excited to see a story like this, especially with cover art by a favorite artist of mine Saxxon/Saxxoff. I may have to add this story to my favorites so I can keep close track of it. I'll definitely be reading this story with loads of interest and definitely see myself making additions in the near-ish future!
Very interested in this story as it includes high fantasy and that, quite frankly speaking, is my jam. I will have to look into it more fully when I have more time on my hands, hopefully in the near future. I could definitely see myself making additions to this story! Kudos to the original poster!
This story has big potential for big laughs, a coin that causes pregnancy isn't a concept you see very often so I'm pretty intrigued by it. I've seen this story around on the site now and then so I might have to look into it further in the near future.
Very refreshing to see underage characters expressly off limits in a story. Always been a big fan of DC and Batman in particular, and would especially like to see some of the ladies of Gotham get more curvaceous. I will keep this story on my list of things to read and will be looking for places to make additions.
Seems a straightforward concept which I will make a note of getting into further in the future. Looks like a fun story as well. Always interesting to have stories based on compelling anime and manga series. Will have to see if I find story threads where I can make additions.
I've meant to get into the anime One Piece for a very long time, as it's something many of my friends enjoy. I also quite like weight gain fiction, though I can't say I'm into vore personally. No matter I can just avoid those chapters! Kudos to the original poster on an interesting story concept.
Always interesting to see fics about pokemon. Might get into this story at some point, but it caught my eye as Gardevoir is my favorite psychic pokemon of all. It could certainly be interesting to read about one getting really super fat. Will have to check this out.
This seems to be a logical sort of fiction to make of Alice in Wonderland, I will have to look into the storylines more in detail later when I have the time. Could be a very fun story with all the strangeness of Lewis Carol's original being quite possible.
Could definitely be an interesting story. I'll have to check it out in more detail in the future, from what I've seen so far there's not been much detail put into the chapters and there aren't many choices put in the different plot paths. But I can see this story has potential, kudos to original poster on a good concept.
Seems like an interesting concept, and I have enjoyed many of the stories by the original poster before, so I will make sure to check it out and see if there are any plots that I would like to see fulfilled in the story threads. Gonna keep this one in mind for future reading.
I've read a bit of this story and it's largely (lol) very well written. I hope to have the time to check it out more often in the future and will probably make additions to some of the plot threads that catch my eye if I have the creative juice to do so. Looking forward to exploring this story more.
I haven't read much slob fiction, but this one could be interesting. Might have to check it out in more detail in the future, and I will keep this story in mind for days when I'm feeling more adventurous. Sonic is always a good target for expansion after all.
Always good to see some turnabout, especially when the person getting the tables turned on is arrogant. Enjoyed this story a lot in the past when I checked it out and plan to get back into it. May also make additions if plot threads catch my eye! Kudos to original poster!
Spells and wishes via the internet would be an amazing thing! I like the concept a lot and definitely want to get into this story more in the future. I may or may not make additions, I'll have to wait and see if I stumble across a plot thread that catches my fancy, but kudos to the original poster on a great story idea!
I love stories about magic and weight gain so I am interested to explore this one. I haven't had much time to look around the plot threads but I definitely intend to do so. I will also likely add to this story as well, since some of my favorite things to write are fantasy weight gain.
Would like to see the male weight gain storylines expanded a bit more (lol) but this is a good story for sure. Lots of great authors have added chapters to it and I intend to explore it more fully when I have the time. Kudos to the original poster on a story well written.
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