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Review by gulshan kumar
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
At sad moments, one needs genuine consolation and encouragement to face the event. It is cruel to shower on him meaningless phrases and suggestions. It is better to listen rather than say and if necessary genuine physical help need be given. The poll is very apt and useful
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Review by gulshan kumar
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Sex is very important aspect of human life. For adults, it is next to meals only. There are many fetish and traits linked to sex. Oral sex is one of them. The maladjustment arises when the partners don't have the same traits. So, if one partner is interested in oral sex and the other not, there is likely to be dissatisfaction to one or both partners. Hence, the topic assumes significance.
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Review of How do you relax?  
Review by gulshan kumar
Rated: E | (4.0)
Everyone has his own way of relaxation. In fact, work and relaxation are same. What is work to one is relaxation to another. singing may be relaxation but it is work to a professional singer. Writing is job to a professional writer but it is hobby of a casual writer. We can relax by changing item of work. For example, if one is reading articles on religion and spiritualism, he can relax by switching to poetry. The author has certainly selected a nice theme for the poll.
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Review of Why do you write?  
Review by gulshan kumar
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
It is aptly said the civilized societies are ruled by books. The writers influence the course of events by their writing. Hence, the purpose of writing assumes significance. the author has done a great job by going through the question of why writers write. The writers have great responsibility towards society. In this context, the poll assumes significance.
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Review by gulshan kumar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Religion is the science and practice of spiritualism and a code for regulating our lives for peace, progress and prosperity to all. Religion is, unfortunately, a divisive force as many religious communities have developed. Mostly, nobody chooses a religion. Religion is by birth in religious communities. I belong to Hindu Religion by birth in Hindu religious community. But the poll is about what We practice. Hence, I have mentioned 'atheism'. But it is also not so correct. There are no rituals in atheism nor atheists are organized as community.
As religion is center to many human activities and relations and also the customs and practices pertaining to property, marriage and occasions depend on religious communities, the Poll is significant. I feel, religion as spiritual belief is distinct from religion based community. . .
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Review of Jealous?  
Review by gulshan kumar
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Jealousy is the worst vice. It shows narrowness of mind. In personal relations, it arises when someone is over possessive and feels insecure. Jealousy and suspicion go together. The suspicious individuals get jealous on trifling matters. The fact is that most of us suffer from the vice some time or other in life. The autor has selected a good matter for poll. .
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Review by gulshan kumar
Rated: E | (4.5)
It is wisely said- Let bygones be bygones. We have no control on past. It is no use crying over split milk. But it is easier said than done. everyone repents some times in his life. So the poll is on a very personal sensitive matter. It also points to the necessity of planning our actons well if necessary by taking expert advice so that we may not have to regret later. The author has done well by initiating poll on the matter.
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Review by gulshan kumar
Rated: E | (4.5)
vegetarianism is gaining popularity. Most people turn vegetarian for the reason of avoiding cruelty to animals. There are many who consider vegetarian food good for health. Actually, the health factor needs medical opinion. We should not ignore the fact that food for men and animals and even plants comes from living bodies only. even the plantations have lives. In fact, eating potatoes and eggs is same. The pain of the plants and trees is not visible felt. Nevertheless, eating animal flesh and vegetables is equally crfuel. The author has done a good job by highlighting the matter through the poll.
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Review of Who was Jesus?  
Review by gulshan kumar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Christ was an embodiment of love, compassion and sacrifice. He played a great part i humanising the human society. He taught us to as true human beings. Love, mercy and service to humanity are his very valuable messages. the Christians believe him to be son of God. Whatever be the difference of opinion, his historic role is indeniable. The Poll is good device to maake people give a thought about the incomparable personality of Jesus.
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Review by gulshan kumar
Rated: E | (5.0)
The poll is on a very good topic. It is a glaring fact that most individuals believe blindly in the faith and beliefs of the religious community they belong to by birth. There is hardly any one who chooses a religion by conviction. The poll poses a thought provoking question. It is a good poll.
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Review by gulshan kumar
Rated: E | (4.0)
I understand that the options refer to time zones. so the idea of the poll appears to be to fin out time zone wise composition of the participants in the writing.com. However I fail to understand how this poll is relevant to personality or personality test.
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Review by gulshan kumar
Rated: E | (4.0)
The importance of good hardware can hardly be over emphasized. the author has done well by this poll to find out how users care about their computer. Key Board and mouse are significant devices to give output to the computer. The author's attempt is commendable.
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Review by gulshan kumar
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
It is considered a weakness to cry. A strong person does not cry because it is sign of weakness. But crying is natural in moments of sadness. Just as love and hatred go together, laughter and crying both are facts of life. There are occasions when one has to cry. The poet has very beautifully explained this. The wording and rhyming of the poem are very pleasing.
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Review by gulshan kumar
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is a good exercise to assess readers interests. The response to the poll will be helpful in promoting the journal by considering the readers' interest.
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Review by gulshan kumar
Rated: E | (4.0)
English is considered as international language. Undoubtedly, English is playing a vital role in international education, trade, tourism and contact. The poll is a good exercise to know the percentage of English speaking people, even if it is not their first language or mother tongue. As expected, greater percentage of English speaking population is in American continent.
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Review by gulshan kumar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Today's world is a big global village. International trade, communication, tourism, cultural exchange have changed the shape of world. Now no body can seriously claim that he can remain aloof from what happens in countries other than his own. The Poll is a very good attempt to understand the public view of internationalism.
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Review of Counting Cars  
Review by gulshan kumar
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
It is a very interesting poem beautifully depicting the consequences of blind jealousy and hatred. The poem is in first peson. The poet is full of hatred for the guy who is to grab his love. He kills the girl' brother by mistake and he can only repent and do nothing except count cars. The guy of whom he got jealous has got what he wanted.
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Review of Bird Heart  
Review by gulshan kumar
Rated: E | (4.0)
The poet likens heart to a caged bird. Obviously, the cage is nothing but human body. The poet has used many metaphors to describe heart. It appears that he actually means soul which is caged in human body. He says that one day the bird will be freed. It means that on death of the human body, soul (heart) will be freed. It is a philosophical poem. Exact meaning can be only guessed but the poet alone knows the true meaning. On the whoile, the poem is fine and well worded.
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Review by gulshan kumar
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I found the reviewing guidelines test very helpful. It has helped me in making future reviews. I feel that every one indulging in review of articles, poems and other items should familiarize himself with the reviewing technique and go through the test so that he may do justice to the job.
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Review by gulshan kumar
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
It is a very beautiful well composed poem. The poet gets a glimpse of a middle aged woman while watering the plants. The woman is lonely.and sad. The poet depicts very nicely the mindset of the woman. The poet prays for her. The style of the poem is very pleasing. It is a pleasure to read it.
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Review of Dreams!  
Review by gulshan kumar
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
It is a short poem fantasizing beauty of poet's beloved and the warmth of her kiss. The poem is very romantic and he is so passionate that he wishes the dream should never end. He has used metaphor very impressively. His choice of suitable words is indeed remarkable.
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Review by gulshan kumar
Rated: E | (4.5)
Isleen is a little fairy. She was taken away by Haru. Isleen chose to live with humans. Moonmmist missed Isleen. she was not happy to part company but she consoled herself as Isleen herself chosen to live with humans. Isleen is very naive about human ways and nature. Haru trained her in wearing dress. She was so naive that she could not understand why Haru blushed while helping her to wear under garments like Bra. Haru even helped her in shampooing andcombing. He explained that he was making hair better. The story is narrated by Moonmis, Haru aned Isleen. The narration by Isleen is most interesting. The story is very interesting from begining to end.
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Review of terrorist  
Review by gulshan kumar
Rated: E | (4.0)
The author has made a good attempt to analyze causes of terrorism and the motivation behind such activities. the author has viewed that the terrorists are uneducated lot and are full of hatred and enmity towards mankind.
The author has, however, missed a point. The terrorists are not so uneducated. They are educated but misguided and have an exaggerated view of superiority of their own religion and they view their activities as a holy crusade. It is the intolerance, orthodoxy and fundamentalism that gives rise to terrorism.
However the author has made a very commendable effort to write the piece on terrorism.
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Review of Help Us Help YOU!  
Review by gulshan kumar
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
It is utmost important to promote a web site for its effectiveness. Unless great number of net users join and actively participate, the site cannot give good results. The item 'help us to help you' gives very good guide lines to writing com members to promote the site. It rightly suggests that each member of writing com spread the message to others. It is a good suggestion that the members visit writing sites and promote writing.com there.
But I have one doubt. Other writing sites are competitor to writing.com and they may not take kindly to promoting ourselves on their sites. This needs elucidation.
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Review of Devil You  
Review by gulshan kumar
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
The author has made smoking cigarette theme of his poem. cigarette is the devil he cannot get rid of. He laments that the devil in shape of cigarette is his constant companion. Though sure that the devilish cigarette is the slow killer, the poet is unable to quit it because it never goes out of his mind. The poet has very nicely worded his interesting poem.
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