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Review of Jesus  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Perfectly written and excellent execution- congrats- this is very, very nice!
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Review of Relief  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Interesting...

Princess
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Review of Hide My Eyes  
Rated: E | (4.0)
WOW... I am not sure of what else to say. This was painful and sad; hope it helped in writing it out...

Princess =(
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Review of The Bum  
Rated: E | (4.0)
A bit confusing, not sure what it is all about although it catches my attention for its may be interpreted in many ways...

Interesting!

Princess
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Review of A Reason  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very nice! I enjoyed your thoughts and style in writing this poem very much!!!

Princess
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Review of Winter  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very interesting the way you choose to explain the distance in this couples life... it invokes images while reading... good work!

Princess
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Review of A Wife"s Lament  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow... I think we all have felt this!

Liked it lots...

Princess
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Fabulous! I feel the depth of your love... great writing!

Princess
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Review of Dancer  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Sassy and sweet; just like a real women!

Nice poem- I liked it!

The Princess
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Review of Unrequited Love  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Love is such a beautiful thing- makes us all crazy!

I enjoyed your poem; very nice!

The Princess

(PS: Love yourself more...!!!)
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Very nice but I wish it was a bit longer... you were really getting my attention!

A bit more, and you wil have a very good poem... consider extending it some... (I too, tend to create some short peoms, but when I reflect on them, I wish I would have said more...)

The Princess
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Rated: E | (4.0)
You were right, too long- not a poem, but the heart was in it, and that makes it perfect!

Nice of you to write this for your girl, I am glad to have found it on the site!

The Princess
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Review of Fixation  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Simply wonderful; congratulations for your lovely poem.

I loved it!

The Princess
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Rated: E | N/A (Unratable.)
I truly liked this; nice work! I did one today for SADS, is this for it as well- same topic- heart.

Great work, look forward to hearing from you and will look at more of your work.

Regards,

The Princess
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Review of Longing  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
=) this is great... a bit sad, sassy and puzzling; hope it's not too true to heart!

Great tempo; loved it- niceWork!

The Princess
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Review of Her Hand  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Heavy!!! I like the words very much; nice and to the heart! GREAT work!

This was great: " Where will we unleash our quelled passions? Where will we live out our deepest needs and desires and fears and doubts? I have chosen to explore that road traveled by none with wisdom and by many walking hand-in-hand with their demise...there is no way out of where we have come to stand."

The Princess

PS: I think there is one spelling error at the: meets mine own... did you mean to say my own?
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Review of Fairy Dancing  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very, very nice! As I read this I was smiling... the words are perfect! Great poem... I like the imgination that comes through... =)

Thanks for sharing it!

The Princess
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Review of Love  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautiful!!! Absolutely felt it!!!

U need 2 fix a couple of grammer things; past/present tences; and capitalize God.

Love ya! I am going to send you gold... LOL!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
WOW... this is beautiful! I love this:
Without you my sun becomes my night,
Without you my moon becomes my nightmares
Without you my stars have no light, dreams or hope.

I am so glad you are writing... and placing it online to share!
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Review of Being A Man  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Another wonderful poem! You are truly very gifted... Your content matter are honorable, and your technical abilities very strong.

In particular, I love your "old-world style", (being a Princess...) I admire your "eloquent words"... I love “Perhaps. If so, I’d be glad. Age only makes an adult. Understand?”

In my quest to locate authors of interest, I believe you are certainly one which meets my objective.

Simply wonderful and philosophical!
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Review of Let Her Be A Weed  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Simply beautiful. I have not read anything this far at writing.com as moving and as sweet and tender. This is very moving... Cngratulations! This is a perfect poem. I hope you write many more like this one!

Thank you for sharing it with all of us!

Princess
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I love the idea. I enjoyed it very much... Great wording: "Only half discovered,
and barely understood" and "passing creature."



Princess
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Absolutely fantastic!!! Loved your expression and the reasoning...

Princess
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