Wow. What a great poem. You have a real knack for poetry. I enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for posting and sharing your poem. Keep up the great work.
I thought your poem was very good. I really enjoyed reading it. I thought your poem was a little dark, a little evil but that is what makes it so good. I think you have a real talent for writing poetry. Thank you so much for posting and sharing your poem. Keep up the great work.
I like your story. Sometimes it is good to have alone time. I actually love my alone time and I prefer it. Thank you for posting and sharing your story. Keep up the great work.
I was the same way growing up. So innocent. I now look at my nephews who are 7 and 9 and see how innocent I really was. Great poem. Thank you for posting and sharing your poem. Keep up the great work.
I am so sorry you feel so bad. Anything I can do to help?? If so let me know. I thought your poem was good. Thank you for posting and sharing your poem. Keep up the great work.
Wow. I loved your story. I could not get enough of it. I enjoyed reading the story. Thank you for posting and sharing your story. Keep up the great work.
Wow, what and excellent poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Soldiers are brave people, especially the ones that experience wars. Thank you very much for posting and sharing your poem. Keep up the awesome work.
Your first attempt at poetry was good. I did enjoy reading your poem but I thought it dragged a little. Thank you for posting and sharing your poem. Keep up the good work. I have written one poem and only one poem. It is in my portfolio and it is called Memories, if you would like to read it.
Wow. What a beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading your poem from start to finish. Thank you for posting and sharing your poem. Keep up the awesome work. :)
Thank you so much for posting and sharing this story. It is so important to teach our little ones about kindness and love for animals. That animals are an important part of our lives. I do not have children of my own but I do have two beautiful nephews. They adore animals like I do. Jack, my 9 year old nephew, calls my mother's dog UNCLE Ralph. LOL. This cracks me up. I really enjoyed your story and I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the awesome work.
JJDel
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