Wow. I really liked your poem. I could relate and yes I could save a soul. I was a paramedic and I have saved many people from certain death but I also lost a lot of people. Thank you for sharing and posting your poem. Keep up the awesome work.
I thought your poem was okay. It needs a little work. I am not sure how but it just did not sit well with me. Thank you for posting and sharing your poem. Keep on writing.
I am sorry you feel this way. Yet I have been in your shoes too. I feel like I am screaming but nobody hears me. Your poem has touched me. Thank you for posting and sharing your poem. Keep up the good work.
I don’t think depression is just a phase. It is a very real issue and it hurts. I have depression and bipolar disorder. Thank you for posting and sharing your poem.
I find that people now a days do not have any courtesy. I have met so many rude people over the last few years and they drive me absolutely bonkers. I have become very jaded which I do not like. I also did that I am rude right back to these people. Thank you for posting and sharing your story. Keep up the great work!
Awesome poem. I really liked it and I enjoyed reading it. It was very creative. Thank you for taking the time to post this and share this poem. Keep up the great work.
All I can say is WOW. I never thought of the word depression like that. I really enjoyed reading this poem. I printed it out and placed it on my wall so I could remind myself that I don't have to feel this way. I suffer from Bipolar and BPD (Borderline Personality Disorder). Depression is a big part of both illnesses. Thank you for posting and sharing this. Keep up the awesome work.
You are right the poem is sad in a sense. I thought it was very good and very creative. Thank you very much for posting and sharing your poem. I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work.
I really liked your poem. I thought it was very creative. Thank you so much for posting and sharing your poem. It brought a smile to my face. Keep up the good work.
I really enjoyed reading your poem. I thought that your poem was awesome. I love the dark. I do not like the heartache though. Thank you for posting and sharing your poem. Keep up the great work.
Wow what a poem. Very well done. I enjoyed reading your poem. I thought your poem was excellent. I can identify with the descriptions for I suffer from depression too. Thank you for posting and sharing your poem. Keep up the awesome work.
I love the name Sophia. I had a Golden Retriever named Sophia. She was beautiful, smart, and very loved. I loved your poem. I thought it was very creative. Thank you for posting and sharing your poem. Keep up the great work.
JJDel
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