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Review of The Storm  
Rated: E | (5.0)
hey, I loved the poem...very moving and I think there is also a hidden message in it that is if I am not looking to deeply into it...sorry just got out of A.P. english literature and I am analyzing everything that I read now. Anyway, I would love to read any other poems that you have since this one is so good, I love the ryhming(don't think I spelled that right). It brought the whole poem together. I was disapointed when you ended it so abruptly, you should make it longer, I think that will make it even better. However, here is some gift points to help you in your...whatever the word is.
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Review of Kalira's War  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Yay...hey girl good sotry, although I have already looked through it. Just fix the parts that you want to fix and your story will be off the chain. Oh and here is a few (a few because I don't have that many) gift points to help you out okiedokie. Anyway how have you been...wait you probably do not even know who this is...it is me Nykia'...I just finally found you on this thing, I am finally figuring out how to work it. My name on this thing is
Heavens-angelicdevil or heavens-angdev for short. Anywayz keep up the good work chick and you will go way, way far.
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