Hi Tim, Your poem "A Mightier Justice", is very good I liked the rhymes they were perfect rhymes. The message was clear and it had a nice rhythm and flowed well from start to finish. I did not see any spots where it seemed to be forced or where it did not make since, this was a nice job writing this poem. Thanks for sharing, Write On!
hi Dan, I just read Your poem "Poetic Canvas". I think you did a good job writing this item. It is colorful and I like that you refer to the squirrels and the great big sky. This is a poem I had a bit of a time to figure out exactly what you are talking about. It is a pretty sounding poem, I think you mean that you feel alone. but I'm not sure. thanks for sharing and write on!
Hello I am with the WDC Power Reviewers Group and I just read this item "The Book" By Rodney Gray, I think it is an unusual book, the title is good I think it is rightly named. I did feel that some of the sentences were a bit too long. But for the most part it was a good piece of writing. I thought several parts of the story sounded sort of poetic whether that was intentional or not I don't know. but all in all the first chapter albeit long was good.
hi bear,i am with the power reviewers group and i want to give you a review of your poem about the dog called " Boots of Belefonte" it is a real good poem that tells a story about a dog they some call boots. i found this to be a funny little poem story. i think they will all live happily ever after or i hope so. this rhymed well and had a great little rhythm. you really can write good poetry.
hello Tim, I am with the Writing.com Power Reviewers group and I want to review your item "Pre-Arranged Arrangements". This is a nice poem I think you did a good job writing it, I think it is very different and I liked it. I for one can relate as I am one of the types of which you speak.LOL
you have one verse of very interesting subject matter.
hi jackneigut, I am glad to have read this story it is awesome, I think it must have taken a lot out of you to write this item. I am so sorry for your loss, it must be terrible to lose a child. I believe in God and I think that he does everything for a reason we may not understand it or agree with it, but in his wisdom he knows more of the world than we do. we never know what kind of afterlife a person will know, perhaps it is a great paradise and the dead person is much better off.
it's easier to think that anyway. your writing is very nice, I think you handled this subject with grace and strength. Write on
hello Tim, my name is honeysuklerose and I just read your beautiful poem called, " My Lover's Wings".
I found it to be very appealing and a good use of metaphors.
I think your girlfriend much feel very fortunate to have a man who can write such beautiful poetry for her and about her.
I think you did a good job.
Hello Donkey Hotay, I just read your short story "A wolfin sheeps clothing", I must say you have a good sense of humor, this was an amusing little story about a wolf who liked one of the sheep in a different way. my favorite line from your story is:
"I like wooly rumps and I just can't lie". I t is like the song "big butts". I really loved this comical look at the barn yard so to speak. the wolf sure was cool. thanks for sharing .
Hi JohnnyBubba, I just read your poem called "Sad Eyes".
I think it is so beautiful and in itself sad. your rhymes were very good and you had a lyrical rhythm. I really think you did a good job. my favorite lines were:
"If I only knew what I could do
To make your eyes seem bright
I’d spend every moment with you
I dream about you each night"
This was a perfect stanza I think you did a fantastic job writing this poem congratulations.
Hello Jack Goldman, this I thought was going to be a scary horror story but it ends with a funny joke. This is very imaginative I don't know how you can come up with a story such as this. I think it is very creative and has a brilliance to it.
I liked reading this story and I look forward to reading more of your work, Keep up the good work.
hi Averren, I just read your story, "Touch of Magic"
I thought it was very good, Though I wonder if you are going to add more to it. It didn't quite seem finished to me. anyway I thought Rena was a likable character, she was self reliant .
I thought you had unique places and names. I enjoyed your story and I look forward to more . Rena was at once a Ranger.
I thought the part about the undead and the skeleton was neat.
Thanks for sharing your story with us all.
-Honeysuklerose-
Hello denbo356, I just read your story "Chief Jimbob"
It was a riot, I laughed at it because Jimmy had to dress up
like an Indian Chief, His boss was very mean She made him
dress like that. Your characters were strong I thing Jimmy was likable whereas his female boss was a mean person who took
advantage of him needing this job. It was a good story a nice plot. I saw a couple of type O's but other than that I loved your
story.
I think this is a special poem, i saw it on the review page and I knew I had to read it. it is beautiful and oh so true. to bad everyone can't find the faith. great poem , good writing, excellent message.
Hello Smafas, this story,"Shrunk into his hands..." is very good, it is creative and invites many writers to add to the story which can take so many different directions. The collection of Characters you have created are nice, you have a teen boy and his brother and his best friend
you also have the parents. who can come home from Texas at some point. I added a chapter myself, I had them to find an object to which they believe came from an alien space craft and they think Jake was abducted and shrunk by the aliens. pretty lame but that's my story and I'm sticking to it. lol
Hi, I just read "My Chains" it was a real nice poem
I enjoyed the ending of it where you reveal what you
are actually speaking about. a war with your flaws
I think we all have that, I know I do. I've too many to
count. but you had good rhymes and very good rhythm.
the poem flowed well good job keep it up.
honeysuklerose
hi, I'm honeysuklerose, and I just read your story :Charisma-theDevil's Gap-
I think you did a good job writing this story. the plot is extraordinary and I felt that the characters were very likable and believable. I think the dialogue was right on it was thought provoking and just down right good writing. thank you for sharing this story with me. I give you
hello Jp Murphy you did a very nice job on this poem I enjoyed reading it
it had some very good rhymes and it had a nice rhythm, it flowed nicely.
my favorite lines from the poem is:
Times hands are moving they’re quickly passing by,
The sun is setting on the story of you and I,
Although without a hello can you have a goodbye,
If I said I didn’t want more would it be a lie,
I did not see any mistakes with your writing
you did a very nice job.
Hello Danielle Stewart, I found this item while looking at my email page. I was taen by the title and then further dragged in by the description of the item. My father was a soldier many years ago and faught in a horrific war. I thought your piece grabbed the hearts of we who did not serve making us realize how horrible your time away from home must have been. Thank you for serving our country and protecting us and our freedoms. Your item is a winner in my book. very emotional.
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