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Review of I Wish, I Dream  
Review by David
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like this poem, even though i cannot relate to it for the moment being, i still find that this poem is really well written. Keep it up. Sincerely, David.
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Review of Story of Life  
Review by David
Rated: E | (2.5)
No offence, but your grammar is really bad. Remember that "i" and every sentence is begun with a capital letter. Try to get a little more of a hang of your grammar and your spelling mistakes, and besides that, your story is good. You should also try making it longer. If you follow my advice, this rating could someday become a solid 4.0
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Review by David
Rated: E | (4.5)
Okay M. Harris. Please note that my rating is actually 4.7. Except there is no option for that. Okay, now that that is off the table, I can get to the point. Your story was well written, and told a heart-warming romance story between Kathy and Taylor, and shows how life is for the friends of lovers of people who are in the army. I think that this story is amazingly well written, and that it deserves much more fans than it has now. Speaking of that, I am clicking on the become a fan as I write this. continue the great work M Harris.
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Review by David
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, I don't know where to start. I'm not usually a fan for these kinds of stories, but I must say that this story was pretty good for a contest limited to one thousand words using the three concepts, and I must say that you've been able to forge an interesting story out of it, a gift that not many people have. Keep up the good work!
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