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Review by A to z
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Hear,hear! Every soul is equal,no matter the vessel it occupies.
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Review of The Tree Sap  
Review by A to z
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow,nice. I can see them.
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Review of A Duo Of Demons  
Review by A to z
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Ooh! Really liked this.
Only thing I'd change is to delete -- the little snot nosed demon whispered in a high pitched voice -- you don't need it.
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Review of Lost  
Review by A to z
Rated: E | (5.0)
Like your traveling companion ☺️ 😉

Nice piece.
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Review by A to z
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Nice story.
Almost quit, though, when I read so many 'was'es in the first sentence -- distracting.
Glad I stuck with it. It 'was' worth it.😉
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Review of The Return Switch  
Review by A to z
Rated: E | (4.0)
There are a few places in this piece where I believe contractions would improve the flow of the story.

Also, eliminating the unnecessary 'that'.

This is a lovely creative start to what I hope is a longer project.
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Review by A to z
Rated: E | (4.5)
Powerful -- pain versus indifference.

Been there, felt that.

Nice work👍
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Review of A Dying Planet  
Review by A to z
Rated: E | (4.5)
Is this pre-Covid? Given today's income disparity I'll bet most of the world's population can relate...

Nice job 👍
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Review by A to z
Rated: E | (4.0)
So...how was your 2014?

Nice 😊
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Review of The Gift  
Review by A to z
Rated: E | (5.0)


For some reason I'm feeling thirsty...

Really liked this.

Thanks for posting.
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