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Review by Jack Edward
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very Good. Long time since I have been captured by the characters in a short short story. Especilly one younge enough to be my great grandson. I would like to see them receive a little more punishment. Maybe one that leads to more rule breaking or some other twist.

Thanks for the memories,

From another ex rule breaker

Jack
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Review by Jack Edward
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Yes,It is indeed a sad love story. A very good first entry to Writers.com. With the feeling you put into this story, I am sure that your future writings will get even better and better.







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Review by Jack Edward
Rated: E | (5.0)
Tree

Very nice. I like your story and I like your bio.

Keep the writing going. I also write children's books.

You are a good story teller. Would have enjoyed some

fish dialogue. Fish do talk your know.


Good luck in your writing and God bless you in all of

your endeavors.

Jack Edward
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