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Review by Jade Jaspers
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
As a reader unfamiliar with both Homer and Edna St. Vincent Millay I still found this writing interesting. Interesting in both points of view of the writers you have showcased here.

First is your interpretation of Homer’s portrayal of his character Penelope. A dedicated wife to a husband lost somewhere and her plight to keep herself chastised to the man whom she longs for. Denying her own personal turmoil in the art of weaving to deliver herself from the ravages of the society she lived in who expected her to marry and behave according to their presets of acceptable behavior for women in those days. I thought you presented her story very well in such a short overview of the story as I understand the Odyssey to be. From your writing I somehow expect her to be from a family of some great means or at least hold some position in the public eye to which she was born into. Therefore the expectation was probably enhanced by Homer for the writing he presented. Second is your interpretation of Mrs. Millay’s, An Ancient Gesture, which is as you wrote, a call to overcome grief of a lost husband in order not to lose ones sense of autonomy and determination to live beyond unexpected and unappreciated circumstance. I feel as though you have presented both ideas very well. Especially to a reader unfamiliar with both who could use this well written piece to explore both of the books and writings you have presented here.

Overall I enjoyed reading your work. I wish you the very best and hope to read more of your writing again.

Jade Jasper


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Review by Jade Jaspers
Rated: E | (4.5)
This verse is so simple yet so very beautiful. The image of the apple blossoms drifting on the winds was such a delightful idea to imagine on a day like today. In just a few words you have painted a picture of an amazing visit to your imagination. Thank you for sharing your gift of verse.

"I inhale, exhale
The sweetness of apple blossoms
Drifting on the winds of the gathering storm"

Best Wishes, Jade Jaspers


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Review by Jade Jaspers
Rated: E | (4.5)
Interesting write up. The story moved along easily as I read and I liked the simplicity of the telling you wrote. I found it interesting that there was a orphaned baby and would like to have known about the child. Such as the age of the child. A nice turn in the events you were describing. Thanks for sharing your ideas. I think you have a very good start to an intriguing story here. Best Wishes, Jade Jaspers
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Review of Gilded cage  
Review by Jade Jaspers
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is one of the better verses I've read in a long while. It was easy to read, easy to understand and created a wonderful story for the reader. You did a great job with the presentation and I hope to read more of your writing. These words here:
Who would understand
the verses I made only for you?
What good is a free songbird
when it is tamed, loved and true?
...are so brilliantly composed I had to reread them to enjoy the depth they reach with such simple words. Thank you for posting this. Best Wishes, Jade Jaspers
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Review of A bird  
Review by Jade Jaspers
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very good writing here. Your words woke a very melancholy sense of action and created a very still scenery. I enjoyed reading it. Best Wishes, Jade Jaspers
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Review of They are me  
Review by Jade Jaspers
Rated: E | (5.0)
Interesting write. I particularly enjoyed, "The stranger stillness within waits alone with their mystery." Opened the imagination on to what could be described with such likeness. Thanks for posting. Enjoyed the reading.

Best Wishes, Jade Jaspers
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Review of Dog Parade  
Review by Jade Jaspers
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a cheerful piece of poetry. I can imagine the wonderful display of puppetry you must see everyday. Kudos on your rhyme scheme as well. I enjoyed it very much.

Best Wishes, Jade Jaspers
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Review by Jade Jaspers
Rated: E | (5.0)
An immensely detailed narrative here full of relatable emotions that plague so many when couples in relationships turn away from their commitments. You wrote a very good description of what can often result from those types of woes. Best wishes.
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