Hi Serenity,
If you feel strongly about your words, then that's how it should be. Those words you said helped you through some dark times which means there are sentiments attached, I feel you.
"In every word, regard the writer's end.
Since none can compass more than they intend,
And if the means be just, the conduct true,
Applause, in spite of trivial faults is due."
This article about reviewers wanted is very interesting and informative. I will certainly visit your website and I am very interested in submitting short stories. I would like you to visit my port and read "Have you Heard the Rumor?" I have been told it would make a good musical or short story.
Thanks for sharing this information.
Jamdownjenny
Hey Brandon M.
There's no denying it . That was very good, but I hope it was just your imagination. The lines and stanzas flowed well and the rhyming was also great but did not take away from the story line. I liked that this poem told a story from start to finish.
Good job!
Thanks for sharing.
Jamdownjenny.
I have never heard the original so yours is fresh to me. I would have loved to hear it sung to a tune but I can just imagine because the words say it all. Good
effort, whenever you rhymed it seemed natural and did not take away from the train of thought.
Good job and keep on writing!
Jamdownjenny
This was a beautiful piece which I would have loved to hear the vocals. Your garden of peace sounds like somewhere I would like to go when the trials and tribulations of this world get too hard to bear. The rhyme seemed natural.
Thanks again for a good read.
Hi Georgiawill,
Thanks for this beautiful haiku poem. I think it must be very difficult to describe something so completely as to make it come alive in three lines. I can just imagine the deep blue waters, the wind blowing, the sail boat and seagull. I can even smell the salt water.
Good job and thanks for sharing.
Jamdownjenny
Hi Rainbow Writer,
Very profound piece you have written about a tragedy that has not left anyone unmoved who has heard of it.
If you could edit it again you would see spelling (hardely) and other punctuation errors. With editing I would give this piece 4.5 so as Nike would say, "Just Do It"
Keep on writing and I'll revisit your port.
Hi Harry,
This is a beautiful poem symbolizing hope for a world that needs hope at this time. I journeyed with you through the storm, the desolation and then finaly, a candle in the distance. The idea of thousands of candles is a dream we would all like to envision and experience. Thanks for sharing and keep on writing.
Please feel free to visit my port and give me a feedback.
Thanks,
Jenny
I can see why you are inspired by the moon. It is very soothing and you seem to have found the right words to convey your feelings.
Thanks for sharing with us.
Jamdownjenny.
William,
A very complex poem coming from a very complex person, I assume?
You write with conviction. there was however, one incorrect spelling - dissapoint should be disappoint.
Thanks for sharing with us.
Jamdownjenny
A very well written poem which says it all, the only thing is perhaps in poetry you could begin each line with a capital letter?
again, i enjoyed this piece, thanks for sharing.
Jamdownjenny
Grifter,
Love can do things to a person, even causing them to do something as romantic as writing poetry(smile)
Good one, coming straight from the heart.
Hi Heavenly Angel,
Yeah, why should we have to apologise for being abused or ignored?
Your poem is well written and seem to come from deep within your soul.
Keep on writing good poetry.
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