Josh Brown's (jbrown15) Reviews

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Josh Brown

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#3905631

Review of Sweater Weather

Review by Josh Brown

Rated: E

| (4.0)

I like its simplicity. There are a lot of great similes and imagery that really put you in the cold weather

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#3903052

Review of She ran, all she could do is run

Review by Josh Brown

Rated: E

| (4.0)

I love the second to last line. Its a good inspirational line, and the whole poem is inspirational to. Good job, Candy!

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#3902997

Review of Passion

Review by Josh Brown

Rated: E

| (3.5)

I like how you chose passion as your emotion. All of the similes are good and make sense.

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#3902978

Review of A Familiar Goodbye (Revised)

Review by Josh Brown

Rated: E

| (4.0)

I liked this poem, I like how its about leaving your past. I like the first line in the second stanza.

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#3902958

Review of Bliss

Review by Josh Brown

Rated: E

| (2.5)

The poem is too short for me to understand whats happening, I don't really like short poems.

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#3902931

Review of Fingerprints

Review by Josh Brown

Rated: E

| (2.5)

I don't really like short poems, they don't give off enough emotion or story to make me like it.

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#3902920

Review of He Will Tell You

Review by Josh Brown

Rated: 13+

| (3.5)

I generally don't like poems that make me depressed, but I do like this poem. I like the third stanza because scars do last forever.

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#3900378

Review of HeartBreak

Review by Josh Brown

Rated: E

| (3.5)

I love the last choppy lines that really show the emotion of the poem. The "you ripped out my heart" line is a little cliche, but overall I really like the poem.

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#3900370

Review of All That's Left Is Pain

Review by Josh Brown

Rated: ASR

| (3.5)

To answer the question of the last line of your poem, I feel depressed. Even though it is depressing, most of the lines are true. I like the truthfulness of it, even though I generally don't like sad poems.

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#3900267

Review of Innocence

Review by Josh Brown

Rated: E

| (4.0)

I can really relate to this poem, I always wish I could be innocent again and not worry about school and just play all day. I feel like the poem could have flowed better if the first stanza had the same rhyme pattern as the other stanzas. Besides that its a very good poem that many people can relate to.

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#3897382

Review of Freedom

Review by Josh Brown

Rated: E

| (4.5)

The poem is about a girlfriend or wife who has escaped from her boyfriend's or husband's abusive ways. I liked how it was an easy poem to understand, it was straight forward. I don't think there was a symbolic meaning of the poem, but I may be wrong. I really liked it, there's not a whole lot to improve.

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