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Review by Josh Brown
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like the message the poem is putting across.
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Review of My Angel  
Review by Josh Brown
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a very relatable poem, everyone eventually goes through the death of a grand parent. I like the rhyming in it as well.
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Review of Black Hole  
Review by Josh Brown
Rated: E | (3.5)
I like how its very choppy and short. A lot of good word choices and good vocabulary.
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Review by Josh Brown
Rated: E | (4.0)
I feel this way when I'm in the shower. For some reasons I go into deep contemplation and think about a lot of things.
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Review of Remember When  
Review by Josh Brown
Rated: E | (4.0)
Christmas is my favorite holiday. This poems makes me can't wait for Christmas this year.
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Review of A Dream  
Review by Josh Brown
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like how you incorporated rhyming and still making it flow. Sometimes people will throw in a word in a poem just so it rhymes, even though it may not make sense with the rest of the poem.
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Review by Josh Brown
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I'm not much of a fan for short poems but I really like this one. It reminds me of my childhood, being innocent and curious of everything.
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Review of Life of Teenager  
Review by Josh Brown
Rated: E | (3.5)
I can relate to the third paragraph really well. And I agree with just about everything you say.
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Review of Julie's Treasure  
Review by Josh Brown
Rated: E | (4.0)
Great story. A lot of descriptive words. Great job :)
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Review of Surprise!  
Review by Josh Brown
Rated: E | (4.0)
Great story but the only problem with it is that you shouldn't have said there was a twist in the description, thats the whole point of a twist, to be unexpected.
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Review of expensive repair  
Review by Josh Brown
Rated: E | (3.5)
Great twist, I wasn't expecting that. You did a good job of getting the whole story out in such a short amount of words. This review is almost as long as the story.
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Review by Josh Brown
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Great twist at the end, I had no idea that was the twist. I was expecting a twist but not that. All the descriptive words made me picture a woman, pink lips and swinging hips.
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Review by Josh Brown
Rated: E | (4.0)
You ruined my childhood, I loved scooby doo. But I liked the story.
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Review by Josh Brown
Rated: E | (3.5)
There were a lot of great descriptive words and really good similes, like the damp pants. But there were some grammatical errors with the quotes, but besides that it was a decent story.
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Review of Homecoming  
Review by Josh Brown
Rated: E | (3.0)
Great story, I liked the line "rage surged through me like a disturbed sea.
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Review by Josh Brown
Rated: E | (2.5)
Other than some grammatical errors, it was a decent story. You could have elaborated more on the nervousness she felt, and some more descriptive words.
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Review of Last breath  
Review by Josh Brown
Rated: E | (3.5)
Great story, I like that it started in the midst of the action. I really liked the line, "fear had taken over her like a blazing fire" :)
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Review by Josh Brown
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I love that 70's show, its one of my favorites. I like the build to the climax.
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Review by Josh Brown
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I like how the story built it up to be something creepy, like it was a real severed head, but then it just turned out to be a fake head. Great story!
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Review by Josh Brown
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
There was great build to the climax even with such a small amount of room to write. The only problem is there could of been some more imagery, great story though.
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Review of succesfull day  
Review by Josh Brown
Rated: E | (2.5)
Great idea, a poem with a lot of potential, just needs better word choice and thought.
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Review of Away  
Review by Josh Brown
Rated: E | (3.5)
I like the line "piercing down with his turquoise eyes", its good imagery. It all made sense with all ten words. Great poem!
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Review of They Try  
Review by Josh Brown
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like the metaphor of "salty streams", I'm glad you used that instead of just saying tears running down my face. Great poem!
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Review of Aggravation  
Review by Josh Brown
Rated: E | (4.0)
A lot of great similes, great poem!
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Review of Who Am I?  
Review by Josh Brown
Rated: E | (4.5)
I can relate because I myself am a Christian. I have done things that I regret because of how I am a christian. Great poem!
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