I can relate to this story.I have been on medication for depression for the last three years.Because of this you seem to take things the wrong way sometimes,or you get the feeling everyone is out to get you.This causes the individual to build walls,that can't be seen.Very good story.
Thats a GREAT IDEA! If you have never wrote a short story that has been published,can you submitt a story for review? I would like to give it a shot.Thank You.
I like the story.The names are unique and yet you can feel each of the characters feelings and thoughts.A sickness with no name is real.Things like that do happen.I also like the way the terms were defined at the end of the story.This let the reader better understand what they are reading.I really enjoyed this story.Please keep writing.
I really enjoyed your web-page.I have been trying to get a short story published,but I have had no luck.Maybe one day,my time will come.Thank you,for being there.
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