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Review of The Skid-Mark Kid  
Review by Dan
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
The title is very fitting. I like how the piece tells a story over a span of time and is fairly short in words. The entire work was interesting and I enjoyed reading it.
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Review of Ecstasy  
Review by Dan
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Alright. Good detail/word choice.
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Review of Auburn.  
Review by Dan
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
So detailed! I can imagine the scene perfectly. I'd like to know more about what happened and what is going to happen next.
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Review by Dan
Rated: E | (3.5)
I like the brevity of it. The piece is very short and gets the idea across.
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Review of Ruined Life  
Review by Dan
Rated: E | (3.0)
I like how modern this poem is; it addresses a conflict that is dealt with today. However the poem is very blatant and doesn't leave much for the reader to figure out.
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Review by Dan
Rated: E | (3.0)
The poem had an interesting flow. It has a unique inspirational subject.
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Review by Dan
Rated: E | (3.5)
I didn't like the ending, it was so uncerimonious, and very abrupt. But the emotions in the poem were on point. I could tell how sad and empty the author feels. These emotions communicate very well to the reader.
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Review by Dan
Rated: E | (3.0)
Its very simple. It doesn't have enough figurative language; I feel like this could have imporved the poem. I liked the male perspective. The subject was interesting.
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Review of Was It Me?  
Review by Dan
Rated: E | (3.0)
The guy feels very guilty about existing. I wish there was more detail. The poem was brief and lacked imagery. The subject is interesting though.
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Review of Selfless Bastard  
Review by Dan
Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked the rhythm of the poem. The imagery builds throughout the poem. It is descriptive. But age should have been introduced earlier or more clearly in the poem.
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