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Review of The Ghost Dancers  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful. The story is told well in a short rhythmic format that keeps you interested through to the end. Thank you!
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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Wow, that was a nice eulogy. And it sounds like you had a very special grandpa. Thanks for sharing this.
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Review of An Embedded Poll?  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love the site. Good work!
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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (4.5)
I thought this was great --- the clarity, conciseness, rhythm and rhyme. I also enjoyed the substance of the message. I enjoyed reading it.
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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very fine work, though a little wordy for my liking. Thank you for sharing this.
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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (4.5)
Check wording here: “Frog-Kissing” is helping people to see themselves in a better light and helping THEM USE THEM USE their improved... (Check the capitalized words.)

I enjoyed your unique Introduction and Terms. You've captured my interest. So, of course, I will review some of your essays.
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Review of My Love  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (3.5)
Short but sweet.
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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed this poem. I haven't read many poems of this type and you describe the beauty and wonder with such clarity... Thank you.
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Review of Exegesis  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I really liked this poem --- realism mixed with metaphors. You asked suggestions for "genre." "Philosophy" may be a good fit??
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Review of The Orchid Bride  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I see why you got first place. I found THE ORCHID BRIDE to not only well-written, but captivating and moving. (Tears welled up in my eyes.) I especially liked the way you used the backflash to hold my attention while Fatima digressed to earlier events.
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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Nicely written. I enjoy yoga too.

You never really know what someone is or has gone through when you see them in a cast... Then again, just because the cast is off doesn't mean the pain is over. I'm glad you made it through and found something beneficial that you can do for the rest of your life.
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Review of Can - Can  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked the story line. You held my interest right to the end.

FYI---In the line, they could here the water --- s/b "hear" the water.
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Review of Hope Alive  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very nice. You held my interest right up to the end.
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Review of I Fell  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)
Excellent. This poem draws you right to the end. I enjoyed the rhyme and rhythm as well as its fluidity.
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Review of The Dream  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wonderful story. It very vividly rings true.
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Review of The Wind Dancer  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! I found this to be really well written --- again, I liked the rhythm and rhyme. The poetry almost sings to you.
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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice. I liked the rhythm and rhyme of this poem. True story?
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Review of Tree Fairies  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your story was not only very creative but moving as well. It bro't me to the brink of tears.
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