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Review of The Question  
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello the Rhyanna and HAPPY [WOW] sixteen years. What a treat [groan horrible pun] this is. Title i attention getting and the summary sets the stage wonderfully. Believable and engaging. Great descriptions. Really enjoyed this from beginning to end. Thanks for posting
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Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there Robin Bateman NaNowWriMoing.Happy fourth anniversary! Title caught my attention as for the summary; well let me put it this way I have one teenage girl for four more days then she turns twenty so know what venting is, Well done rhyme and humor. Nice little shout out at the end.

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Review of Autumn  
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Rixfarmfirl hi and Happy Halloween. This is a good depiction of autumn. Always that one dangling leak wanting to join its friends. Or perhaps it is about life of a person who has outlived all family and friends. Either way I will remember this for a while.

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Review of Autumn  
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there Betina Kroner and Happy Halloween! Title befitting and the summary well used. Sometimes the purest descriptions are the best. This brought about more than just images. They were accompanied by memories of child oh so long okay. Thanks for posting and the brief trip down memory lane.

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Review of Autumn Night  
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there Kotaro and happy halloween! Title is befitting summary well used. This is the third haiku I have read thus far and by for the best. Great imagery. It made me conjure up images of standing on a beach under an autumn moon and have a peacful feeling envelope me. Thanks for the vision and posting

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Review of Lakeside Autumn  
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there and Happy Halloween BigV. Title is attention getting and summary let's the reader know what is being talked about and that is the only problem here. With the use of "jubilee" i thought more of a family picnic than a tree. So if you can some how mention or reference a tree in the work it would be stronger and not have to rely on the summary.

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Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there Callie loves to go haunting and Happy Halloween. I adore Hakius so your title caught my attention right away. Summary is put to good use. Plangent, great description, Is the last word "good" to imitate the call of gesse. My only suggestion is to use line format rather than slashes.

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Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there Gervic and happy Halloween. What a great prompt is this one of your creations? Simply love this. A lone picnic bench standing in the last of the green not surrendering to the gold and orange of autumn.Almost forgot the treeline. Another nice touch to set the mood. Thanks for posting.

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Review of Autumn Memories  
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there Prosperous Snow. Before it passes I will review autumn. Other than a few generic descriptions this is great. Relatable and I felt like I was there. Your brought forward memories of brown grass and homemade ice cream. THanks for posting and the brief jaunt down memory lane.
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Review of Miscellaneous  
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Well hello there Winnie and Happy Halloween! All photos were gppd but i liked the dog ones the best. Es[ecially kike the pooch with his head leaning as if he got caught doing something. Great way to the end the album with that saying. Thanks for posting
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Review of Marvel Wordsearch  
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there TMNTLeo. I am a big marvel comic fan so when I saw the title I was hoping and the summary made my inner self yell lol. You have the perfect combination here. A good number of search and a good level of difficulty of finding. Great job. Do you have a DC wordsearch?
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Review of The Lesson  
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there Ken, Title generic but befitting and the summary is okay, But this mirco fiction is Fantastic. Good flow and great examples. Thank you times ten. I find that focus on form than the intend of the story, I would rather receive a review and rating on content. Don't get me wrong I love the corrections of grammar but please do not base review on such. One question - what is
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Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there Dr. Harley Quinn and Happy Halloween! Oh what I Treat. Thanks for the 6 trinkets and also thanks to ruwth for posting her review on messenger that lead me to the biggest treasure trove of trinkets I have seen. Also thanks for the heads up on the 3 contest I will be looking into them.
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Review of Magic!  
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello there welcome and happy Halloween NEWBIE! Saloni therre are a lot of nice and helpful people here, enjoy. Title is generic but befitting and the summary sets the scence. Belivable conversation that I would really like to know were it leads. Have you ever thought of expanding this into a short story? I think you would do a good job of it. Thanks for posting
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Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Well Hello there and welcome NEWBIE! There are a lot of helpful and nice people here. Hope you enjoy MAJA. Happy Halloween! For a little blurb not bad. Title is befitting and the summary well useed. It is generic in both descriptions and theme yet it got your point across.
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Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello there Harry and happy Halloween. Title and summary well used.Nice flow and kept my attention throughout. Algthough this is not the type of ghost most think of this time of year it is still a ghost story of sorts. Nice touch "I did my best Judy," If this is a fair sample of the rest of your work i will try to visit later
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Review of Orchestra  
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello again April Death Ray. When I saw a section that included hakius well i just had to look. I love the simplicity that can be hiding a deeper double meaning. Here it could merely be an concert but I view many sratty nights like this just waiting for music [life] to start. Thanks for posting
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Review of Thanatos  
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello there and Happy Halloween April Death Ray. Fantastic love the coloring the fog the scythe and of course the shrouded figure. All of it works to present a very forbidding image. Thanos, Grimm Reaper Xyta [the Hungarian female reaper]I wonder how many names Death has. Oh well as long as he/she doesn't come visiting anytime soon Thanks for posting
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Review of My Poems  
for entry "2 Poems (Untitled)" 
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there Garwynn Lang and happy Halloween! Bot a prude but please check your rating of E and consider revising this for some of this may be inappropriate for the younger readers on site, Other than that not bad a bid generic in some parts. Thanks fot posting
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Review of Ash 1  
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there ShaNoWriMo and happy Halloween, I can think of two reasons your daughter would don the nun outfit

1] As a gag to get people laugh
2] As an evil nun

But since I am seeing no goth makeup I am going for #1, am I right? Either way I hope she had fun. 10 years ago does it even seem possible? Thanks for posting
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Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there and happy Halloween Robin Bateman NaNoWriMoing.Wow this is indeed a throwback; even before my time.Still I just love the innocence of it. A farm boy looking at jack-o-lanterns with his dog. A halloween without blood but how can that be lol. Thanks for posting
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Review of A Dragon'sTears  
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there and happy halloween. Don't know why this was listed on the right hand of my screen but i do know that I am glad it was, The title caught my attention right away as I wondered why they would cry. And throughout you use great descriptions for the shedding of tears thanks for posting
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Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: E | (1.0)
Hello there and happy halloween Runemaster0. The title is attention getting and was wanting to see where you were going to take this. The summary although I do not know the game just served to whet my anticipation. AHHH! a test and nothing more. So a one for now. If you go beyond this please let me know so i can up the rating okay?
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Review of Edit  
Review by KingArpod
Rated: E | (1.0)
Hello there fake your life and happy Halloween. Title nor summary were of help as I tried my best; truly i did, to rate this more the a lone one. I looked for a hidden meaning but to no avail. If you had something hidden here I sadly could not discern it. So sadly and regrettably a one it has to be.
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Review of CRAZY MAZE  
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hello there Blind Desire and happy halloween. Found this in the NEWEST STATIC ITEMS section.Befitting tile but it was the well used summary that led me to read on. Okay a few generic lines. Still overall a fun sad read that is a bit errie in a way. Thanks for posting
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