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Review of Clean your closet  
Review by KingArpod
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Well hello there and WELCOME NEWBIE! There are a lot of nic and helpful people here. Here's wishing you reach your writing goals on and off site kv.Title caught my attention right away and the summary sets the stage well. Even though I have seen similar symbolism this was a good read and you did get your point across.

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Review of The House  
Review by KingArpod
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello there and Happy Halloween Arko. For being thirteen and new to writing this is rather well done.I like the overall concept of the piece and am looking forward to reading the continuation. The descriptions of entrance to house well done but would like to see a bit more about the night. Also this kid just heard that there was a shot and the only response is "okay". Why? Does he think their kidding, trying to scare him? I meant Okayto that statment doesn't seem natural. Still overall a job well done

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Review of The Eyes Have It  
Review by KingArpod
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there Angus Of The Dark and Happy Halloween. The title and summary work well together giving me hint of what was to come but never giving it away. At first I thought a normal guy, odd diet, but normal. THen I thought okay is he psycho or is he carving pumpkins [since it is that season] I never saw potatoes coming which made it all the more humorous.Great job

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Review by KingArpod
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well hello there, Happy Halloween but most of all WELCOME NEWBIE! There are a lot of nice and helpful people here. Hope you reach your aspirations Annie Mcakan. Interesting poll like how you offer a brief summary of what they stand for. Not a rah rah person for trump but then again not crazy about Hillary. Like my grandpa used ti say - choose your poison. Thanks for posting and have a fun and fruitful time here

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Review of I Give Thanks  
Review by KingArpod
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there again Prosperous Snow [Neva]. This is the best faith based Senryu I have ever had the pleasure to read. Not only to your faith but also your love of country both which seemed to be abhorred in today's political correct world. My favorite part was that about rest. Simply BRAVO and thanks for posting

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Review of Bogeys  
Review by KingArpod
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello there and HAPPY 6th ANNIVERSARY UnawareAndUnwilling. The title is befitting but ti was the summary that hooked me and it just kept on getting better and better. Somewhere in the middle you show a hint of something ominous and I was thinking oh no the reveal is to obvious. Oh what a pleasant surprise the way this ended.

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Review of Blacken Mirror  
Review by KingArpod
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello there Bleeding Dawn and HAPPY 9th ANNIVERSARY!It is the season for spooky things and this fits the bill to the tee. Such vivid descriptions painted disturbing pictures in my mind. I could not find one generic description used as I read on to the end of this macrabe poem. fantastic job

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Review of Tears  
Review by KingArpod
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello there, happy Halloween but most of HAPPY [wow!] 14th ANNIVERSARY R.B.Snyder! Title befitting and summary well used as it sets the mood and expectation. Although some lines convey generic feeling and themes I rather liked reading this for you got your point across

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Review of Acceptance  
Review by KingArpod
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well hello there,Happy Halloween but most of all HAPPY 1st ANNIVERSARY Beykirah Dessie, may there be many, many more.A slice of life and you present it so well. Interesting and a nice flow. Well describe overall a good job and read. Last line is wisdom that same never achieve. Thanks for posting

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Review of School Zone  
Review by KingArpod
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there Elisa the Olympics Stik. At first when I saw this I wondered to people really have to be told the time of days to slow down. I was looking for the misspelled word and I just could catch it for I fast read it. Then going over it Exept lol thanks for posting

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Review by KingArpod
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there fivesixer. I have been called sarcastic more than a few times in my life, I prefer to call it witty. Love this saying and the attention of Bugs Bunny In that stance is a great addition that drives the point. Oh being sarcastic about being sarcastic funny.

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Review by KingArpod
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there MitchTheJoker and Happy Halloween! what a treat this is [one bad pun deserves another lol]. This is one of the best puns I have read for some time now. Reminds me of fifth grade humor it would had made me giggled ten as it did now. Thanks for posting

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Review by KingArpod
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Well hello there Yubgum and happy halloween!had my attention at the mention of haiku in your title. Cute and brief and for me at lest relatable. Yes overripe banana and peanut butter not a good idea at all but this was and I thank you for posting cause it made me chuckle

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Review of my cat jello  
Review by KingArpod
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello there and Happy Halloween horsegirl. I am so glad that you found comfort sounds like jello was a very special cat. Okay there are a few spelling errors. Still this is a good enough of an introduction to make me want to read more. I will try to get to the other two later next week.

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Review of Anger Poetry  
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Review by KingArpod
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hello there and Happy Halloween Louis L. Have to admit not much happiness here but it is as you said Angry Poetry. That being the title caught my attention. Some of these I like while others not so much. But it seems like a great way to vent anger have you ever done the flip side of this Happy poetry just joking. Overall nice job

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Review by KingArpod
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
HAPPY 19th ANNIVERSARY O'Day-Smith! Title is attention getting and the summary is while used as a scene setter.The negative first a lot of this is very generic, Still you do supple a nice flow of subject and reading. Also like how the reveal isn't foreshadowed it just hits like an emotional hammer at the end Well done

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Review of Haiku Silly  
Review by KingArpod
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello there and HAPPY 10th ANNIVERSARY!Attention piqued at mention of a group of haiku's,so title well used. Summary saying they were silly i couldn't resist. Each of these are funny and a slice of life. Many will relate to some if not all you say things that others might hesitate to but these are true My favorites would be about customer service and the one about the toast. I would feel silly taking the points for the reward was in the giggles. So I am sending them back times 2.

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Review by KingArpod
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Rated: E | (5.0)
HEllo there bri426 and HAPPY 11th ANNIVERSARY! Title is befitting. Summary let me now it was going to be a short piece. Still even at that you give amble descriptions that flesh out the man, Cute has a nice flow and the emotion and conclusion are very believable and relatable.

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Review of Waiting  
Review by KingArpod
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there and Happy 13th ANNIVERSARY darkdave! 13 a number befitting this season but there is nothing scary here. A treat really as what you say is so true when in love waiting; although not wanting to, is endured because of love.Nice flow the only slight drawback i some of the lines are a bit generic. Still overall cute and enjoyable.

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Review of Insanity Scoring  
Review by KingArpod
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello there, happy Halloween and above that Penemue 15th Anniversary!Went to your portfolio to find the quiz but didn't see it. But reading the last line at the end of the key made me want to see if the humor carried through, it did. The list of the categories and the explanation of each got me laughing. Thanks for posting

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Review of THE HOME  
Review by KingArpod
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello there W.E. Wilcox. I usually don't read anything this long. Overall this is well described, characters fleshed out, dialogue believable and well paced. Not crazy about crossing oneself is out of superstition. Still I enjoyed this immensely. The women covering all but her eyes being his wife brilliant as was the ending. I will gladly read this again if you rewrite but like it already

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Review by KingArpod
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there Danna LaRaine and HAPPY 12th ANNIVERSARY! Title tugged at my heart and the summary even more so. What a great tribute to your father the best I have read on site to date. Emotional and stirring. This was such a pleasure to read I would feel bad to take your points so I am sending them back times two. Thanks for posting

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Review of God is Good  
Review by KingArpod
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there again Kris. Enjoyed your mother day's poem so much I went hunting and found this,First off Amen what a great way to profess and share your faith with others. Always inspired those that can do it this well. Not preachy rather uplifting and welcoming GREAT JOB!

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Review by KingArpod
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello there Kris and HAPPY THIRD ANNIVERSARY! Title is appropriate and the summat is well used. Okay there are generic sentiments and description; not all but some. Still you do a nice job weaving emotions and pulling me in. I lost my mome around eight years ago I understand, Nice job

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Review of Life  
Review by KingArpod
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
HEllo there and Happy Halloween! JonathanJoel this is one of the best six word stories I have every read. I understand it's a statement but without giving any specifics you have summed up everyones lifes journey. Great job Title generic but befitting and the summary lets the reader know not to expect more than six words. Once more great job!

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