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Review of Best of Friends  
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Love Shouldn't Hurt  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello there Chesse. Title is generic but befitting as far as the summary goes I few it as sad. Even if this person was getting their just dues to me it is sad that a life meets this end.Three line are of unequal length so hard to find any flow still it describes a bleak situation well.

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Review of Eternal Soul  
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Love Shouldn't Hurt  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there Jazzy. Today is National Epitaph Day and since death is the unfortunate catalyst for such I am reviewing death today. Three lines and you speak deep truths. I enjoyed it without trying not to think about my on eventual demise. Thanks for Posting


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Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Love Shouldn't Hurt  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there Marie. Today is National Epitaph Day. Since death is an unfortunate part I am doing reviews about death and pleasantly found this haiku. Wow at sixth grade what a deep thinker. That sometimes the phoenix does rise from the ashes. Great job thanks for posting.

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Review of Beauty Eternal  
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Love Shouldn't Hurt  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there Enigma. Today is National Epitaph Day and death goes hand in hand. Title befitting and the summary was excellent. Don't usually go of site to review an item but this time I used the link. Question I have is why would you use your work as a summary. Oh well enjoyed the 2nd reading even a bit more as it sunk a bit deeper.

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Review of Judgements  
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there Thanksgiving Bake Shopgirl739. this is the first work I have reviewed of yours. I think this is so well written I will try to remember to visit your portfolio later. Point made with words [in this case used for good] depict cruelty and its aftermath. Well done

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Review of The Witch  
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there Naomi. Title generic but befitting and the summary is well used. Yes indeed this is a typical witch but the detail you use is extraordinary. If one had never seen a witch this would paint a mental image so vivid they would know a classical witch if they ever came across one. Love the ending. Thank you so much for posting

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Review of Bizzar  
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello there Nym Michals. Well the first part of your summary is true this is a silly poem. Still I love this as I can imagine it being the beginning of a great fanciful picture book. The second part of summary doesn't hold up I think even non silly people will enjoy this.

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Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there SWPoet. Title is well used and very attention getting. My poetry knowledge has to enlarge for everything in the summary was Greek to me lol I liked this equating the muse working to pie baking Descriptions so vivid i hungered for my mom's apple pie Last line a good ending

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Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello again as i extend my brake. What a previous little girl. Looking out the window wearing shades. Reminds me of the song "Life is So Bright I Gotta Wear Shads" Love your comment. Well wherever she was headed Hope the Princess enjoyed her day. Thanks so much for posting

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Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there Maurice was doing reviewers celebrating NATIONAL PEANUT BUTTER MONTH but this cause me to take notice and I just had to review. Nice little collection here. Would I be right in assuming set in 1940's or earlier 50's perhaps. These remind me of my Uncle up east. So thanks for the brief trip down memory lane.

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Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello there Harry. Title attention getting pops right off the page and made me queasy. Summary well used neither compere to this funny lighthearted poem with a twist at the end that I never saw coming. Just want you to know I had you on the fav author list but now I am a full fledged fan.

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Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello the sifalls. Sorry but the imagery of a 'peanut butter truck' falls flat for me Don't get me wrong some of the descriptions and suggested use [all though they be generic] to stir up images and memories. But hot enough for me to ignore the elephant in the room. Sorry

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Review of Chocolate  
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there abel and happy National Peanut Butter Month. title and summary are rather generic but that is were generic ends, Well rhymed, great flow, descriptive and very imaginative. I imagined myself as a child. The ending is clever Overall this is Fantastic and should be in a book of children poems somewhere.

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Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there Shannoween! Title befitting and summary lets the reader know the attended audience. Wow this little fart is up to nothing but mischief. As you well describe her intentions of only she were invisible, Well rhymed great flow and a fun read. Unusual use for peanut butter lol. Thanks for posting.

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Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello there logicalnonsense. Title is confusing for no where in work is peanut butter mentioned. Summary does a great job in setting the work up. Another confusion is I can not tell who is talking here 'boys have cooties' and 'no girls allowed'seem contritictary. If the voice issue and title connection are smoothed out this could be a great wofrk.

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Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there Deome and happy National Peanut Butter Month. Title is very attention getting. Take it from the summary you are not a vegetarian lol. Fun lighthearted romp all of it funny with a nice flow and rhyme scream but the funniest saved for the last two verses.

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Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there Malik23. Did you know that this is National Peanut Butter Month? Title is attention getting and the summary is well use.My love for peanut butter doesn't quite reach these heights. Funny and well described and imagined throughout. Fum read for start to finish.

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Review of My Cookie  
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello there jimmy42797. Today is National Peanut Butter month. And what a great cookie to help start off the celebration. Despite the fact this isn't a recipe per say you had my mouth watering my stomach yearning and wishing I had bought some chips to go with my peanut butter lol Good job

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Review of Improbable  
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hello there and Happy Halloween Nathan Faudree. Like the title and the summary. THis is creepy I mean the thought that a character doesn't want to believe he is just that. The probability he can kill you is skim but effective and like I said creepy. As far as one line stories go good job but still it is but one line

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Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (2.0)
Hello there Elle and Happy Halloween. During this time of year if a title tells me "Don't Close My Eyes" I open the wider and anticipate what might be next. The summary was so promising, So what if the story is generic I was really wanting to see what kind of spin you would give it to make it your own. Sadly 1 line but no link, no treat nada Darn. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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Review of Distant Screams  
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there Amanda Marlee and Happy Halloween! What a treat a three line poem that gave me the willies. Descriptions are common but the invitation in your summary to "just image" brought new life to these words especially during this time of year. Keep writing
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Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there SHERRI GIBSON. Do you have any signatures that are not amazing? Great sig for this time of year. An subtle eerie feeling. a ghost image in double and a foggy atmosphere that adds to the feel and I can't quite make it out but to the right it looks like iron gate to a cemetery. You are right another lovely image by kelly 1202. Thanks so much for posting

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Review of Sig from HighWind  
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there and Happy Halloween Sherri Gibson. I understand way you treasure this. What a great signature especially at this time of year. Classic looking witch which I find scarier. Love the coloring, the attention of the bat and the lettering and ... well everything!

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Review of Help  
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Well hello there and Welcome Newbie! There are a lot of nice and helpful people here. Hope you attain your writing goals Fz. Title doesn't help much but the summary sets the stage. Okay this is real brief but I do like it as a reminder for many forget. Thanks for posting and Happy Halloween!

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Review of THINKING OF YOU  
Review by KingArpod
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Well hello there and WELCOME NEWBIE! There are a lot of nice and helpful people here. Hoping you reach your writing goals and this is a good start lillyp2104.Title is generic but befitting it was the well used summary that lead me to lead on, Some of this is generic but I love the way you show the difference in time and a nice sentimental ending.

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