Hello there Kare Enga in Montana. Today is National Pasta Day! I set off in hopes of finding some recipes for such never dreaming I would find such a great tribute, Poem sad in parts "hunger always there" while other parts hopeful "dream a bigger dream" Thank
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Hello there Emma Renee and Happy Halloween. For a while had to refer back to the well used summary [title is also great] to make sure I was reading about pasta and not Halloween lol. Never ever have I read anything from the pasta's few point. This is excellent and almost feel bad for celebrating National Pasta Day!
Hello there and Alexi Mason walking into 2016 and Happy Halloween. This is the favorite smiley I have ever seen. Many times in my life I have felt like this - working into the night; burning the midnight oil as I used to say, on whatever project I was trying to accomplish.
Hello there and Happy Halloween Robert Edward Baker. Title is attention getting and the summary is well use as a hook. I like this but I am a bit confuse you mention last nails in a coffin so I was expecting an eerie ending but then the kiss. Are you referring to the death of innocence? Okay extra points for making me think. Keep writing
Hello there WickedWitch of the Web and Happy Halloween. There are a few traditional things I love on Halloween. Candy witches and dripping blood. This signature has two out of three and like Meatloaf sang two outta three ain't bad. Oh I like dripping blood as long as it isn't my own okay okay as long as it's fake lol Thanks for posting.
Well hello there and welcome NEWBIE! There are a lot of nice and helpful people here. Hope you enjoy your time Thom Willow. Title is okay summary well used as to give the potential reader a clue. Although there are a few generic descriptions here for the most part this is very dynamic as you put forth a great insight.
Well hello there and welcome NEWBIE! There are a lot of nice and helpful people here. Hope you enjoy being around Unknownthatwantstobeknown.Tile reminds me of an old country song and the summary is well used. Although a lot of the descriptions of feelings are generic you arrange them in such a way that it is a powerful read. A message that society hasn't seemed to grasp yet.
Hello there ~MorningStorm~ . I can't help it I got used to watching these kinds of movies with my mother when she wanted company. I saw my fair share of "Manly" movies but if I were to be quizzed on them I doubt if I would be able to get 13 out of 15. I guess sappy and cuteness just sticks with longer or perhaps I have to go check my testosterone level lol Thanks for posting
Hi there Jeff.Found this on the NEWEST STATIC ITEMS section. Title is a good choice summary not much help. Bad news first so this review can end on a high note. A lot of the doubts are struggles are generic. The good - relatable and the flow is nice also liked the way you answered some of your own questions.
Hello there Cubboo! Well boo to you too and Happy Halloween. Thanks for introducing me to yet another form of poetry and for including the format rule. Very well done and a short funny read to boot. Heck I couldn't pronounce this style nonetheless write it lol
Hello there J. Robert Kane. Title was well chosen. As for your summary, yes I did enjoy this fun read. Like how you took the patience to develop the story and did not give the ending away until just that the end. Descriptions good my favorites were the spider web ones. Just one question - would the file be butt cheeks since she only has one butt or is referring to a generic file? not being picky just curious.
Hey there snow, Well my choice are choices were not listed [1] run 2[2] faint. So the closest on of the selections would be "asking them if I could be there Ghostwriter" For a ghost I would be - scared to death. All the choices are selections for non chickens as myself.
Hell there Pretty Purple. This is the first of the review raid on your port. Like the title and summary. Characters roles well defined and the flow of the story works well. Like that the dragon is vanquished in a non bloody manner than having him become a friend and letting them know all was just an misunderstanding.Are there anymore stories with this cast and if not are there anymore in the future?
Hello there Dorianne and Happy Halloween. Title is generic but befitting and the summary is put to good use. The only line I could find any overused description was in line two and that isn't enough to stop me from giving this delightful treat [which should be in a book somewhere] a five star rating.
WOW! When I first started reading this it reminded me of an old "Twilight Zone" episode but this story got stronger and better. Great descriptions> I usually find it difficult to read a item this long I had none with this for it was well paced and intriguing enough to keep me going. Love that they hate him and want to foil his escape next year. GREAT JOB!
Hello there kv, This is what happens get's to formal and uptight. I believe there are normal rules in life that must be followed such as respect and not hurting was other. But I do agree with I thinks is your point. All should be free to dream and become just that if not better. Nice read as you point out some pitfalls of a society which loves to control.
Hello there Brenpoet and Happy Halloween. I love how you write. If there was a way to fan you twice I indeed would. Touching poem. I don't know how those two rings got there but I prefer to consider both Christmas miracles. First the breaking of on handback that let to the finding of rings. Love the ending. You keep writing and I'll keep reading okay?
Hello there K.J/ Miller~PrepMo, Oh it is so easy to see way this received an award and five, five star ratings with mine making it a total of six. From title to end a fun read a place were fantastic descriptions abound. I could write down my favorite lines but then you would be reading your whole poem over again. Thanks so much much for posting this gem.
Well hello there and Happy Halloween GeorgeWDeMuth. The mention of Haiku in title caught my attention right away, love them.Did you know that today is National Nut Day and I Cannot imagine anyone being more appreciative of nuts than the a squirrel. As the one mention in this cute haiku
Hello there and happy Halloween Hyperiongate. Both the title and summary are generic but even part of the story falls in this category. But you break the mode with a wist at the end Alligator in the youngster and one of the treats being poodle. Perhaps you should use an animal most find repulisve but I quess an alligator wouldn't care lol
Hello there Stephen McDonald, Happy Halloween [is thi celebrated in Canada?] more than Happy Halloween, HAPPY 15th ANNIVERSARY. Yes frustration can abound when frustration sets is as you show here. Likes it Favorite line: t:e 7th the one about blades. Well done thanks for posting ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
Hello there Snow. Title attention getting and fit in toward end. Descriptive with the only one I wasn't crazy about cold as Mount Everest generic. Overall I found this a fun read but feel that you had the reveal to early in the story, special tomato juice. Questions: has the town always been infected or was it recently? If it the former would the coldness of touch been noticed earlier. Why would under the bed monster protect? I like this inclusion to the story. Can imagine kids reading this for the Halloween season. Good job.
Hello there catwoman. Today is NATIONAL PUMPKIN CHEESECAKE DAY! Not thinking that would show up in any search I decided on pumpkins. First off Haizey does excellent use. Although the theme is generic her art puts me in the mod for Halloween only ten days away. Thanks for posting
Hello there Jale Decrittate and HAPPY fourteenth ANNIVERSARY! Title is generic but befitting. Summary takes away the reveal at the end but still this read was a great amount of fun. Descriptions a great way to show the many faces of Death. Death, Grim Reaper Zyata no matter the name I don't want a visit any time soon lol Thanks for posting this
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