Evocative of a certain culture I am not familiar with. Sounds interesting. The images are fresh and live. Is it a translation from some other language into English, I wonder! I enjoyed the reading. Thanks for bringing in a new flavour to the poetry page.
'Her boot prints on the sands of my mind's oasis' Wow! What a nice inflection of the immortal lines! Lovely! Fluent, graceful and endearing. Keep penning. Only, just mind the length as you go along-without losing that lyrical quality, of course.---Kuchanna
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