Hello, I'm Angel and I'll be reviewing your piece, "A Unicorn is Born" today.
This was so much fun to read. I think children would like it a whole lot. Unicorns are such a wonderful subject to write about. While I was reading this a light, playful and airy tune was playing through my mind.
Hello, I'm Angel and I'll be reviewing your piece, " The Girl Across the Street" today.
First off, I'm a sucker for a good romance and this is one of them. I wish this was a book. I'd read it through the night. Their were only a few spelling mistakes from what I could see. All in all it's a wonderful story. Keep writing.
Hello Writer, I'm Angel and I'll be reviewing your piece, "Fox in the Center" today.
Personally, I read this because it's about a fox. I just love foxes. One of my favorite animals of all time. This definitely has promise in it I believe. I'd love to read more when you write it. Keep writing.
Hello Writer, I'm Angel and I'll be reviewing your piece, "Love Isn't Scary" today.
My first thought after reading this is "This is truly a lovely poem". I really like it and from what I can see and tell it has no grammatical errors at all. Beautifully written. Keep writing.
Hello Writer, I'm Angel and I'll be reviewing your piece, "Dancing Trees" today.
My first thought on this piece was that love is such a beautiful thing when you find it and that you should cherish it. This was wonderfully written and flows absolutely beautifully. Keep writing.
Hello Writer, I'm Angel and I'll be reviewing your piece, "Magnificent Sunset" today.
First off I just want to say that this is beautifully and wonderfully written. I don't know much about poetry but you definitely captured my attention and kept it throughout. Keep writing.
This was wonderfully written and very well thought out. I just love it. The only suggestion I have is to break it into paragraphs so it's not a wall of text. You can put it in paragraphs only if you want to, though. Keep writing and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Aww, this was truly a wonderful and sweet read. The way you detailed things was remarkable. I was kind of sad that it ended for now. I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep writing.
This was beautifully written. I love the story of Persephone and Hades. It's my favorite Greek mythology. I do wish she had stayed with Hades like in your story. Keep writing and I look forward to reading more.
This was a beautiful song. I just love it. After reading it I felt like I wanted to hear the music that goes to it. I felt like maybe it would be in acoustic guitar with some drums or maybe a solo piano piece.
This is such an amazing piece. I was captured by every sentence and just kept getting reeled in by the more I read. Wonderful work. I look forward to reading more. Keep writing.
This is excellent work. I felt like I was actually there. There were no mistakes from what I could tell. It truly was suspenseful and I'm so glad she got her babies out of there. Wonderful work. Keep writing and I look forward to reading more of your work.
This was great. I really liked it. It holds a good moral in it. One that should always be done. There were few mistakes and it flowed wonderfully. Keep writing and I look forward to reading more of your work.
This is truly beautiful. I just love it. I love listening to the rain, too. No mistakes of any kind as far as I can see. Keep on writing. I look forward to more of your work.
Hello, I'm Angel and I'll be reviewing you today. My first impression after reading this story was that I wanted to know a lot more after reading it. I hope I get the chance to. I noticed some mistakes in grammar and spelling but all in all great job. Keep writing. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Hello, I'm Angel. I'll be reviewing you today. My first impression upon seeing the title was truthfully "Ooh! A love story." I'm a sucker for a good romance. Upon reading it I really loved it. It was so cute and comedic somewhat. I found no mistakes I believe and it flowed nicely. Keep writing. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Hello, I'm Angel. I'll be reviewing this piece today. This was a heartbreaking piece. I truly felt your words as I read them. I don't believe there are any mistakes and it flows rather nicely. I was brought to tears with this piece. Keep writing. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Hello, I'm Angel and I'll be reviewing this piece. I believe it was a truly fun read. It was probably fun to write as well. From what I could tell there were no mistakes and it flowed wonderfully. Keep on writing. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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