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Overall Impression: I am not good at reviewing poetry, I care not for the rules, I only know what I like. This is a very interesting format, quite enjoyable!
Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome!
Readability: A well written and entertaining read!
Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.
Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them!
Overall Impression: I am not good at reviewing poetry, I care not for the rules, I only know what I like. This is a very interesting poem that rings so true with every verse!
Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome!
Readability: A well written and enjoyable read!
Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.
Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them!
Overall Impression: I am not good at reviewing poetry, I care not for the rules, I only know what I enjoy. This is a very interesting poem, well thought out, and points well honed.
Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome!
Readability: A well written and entertaining read.
Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.
Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them!
Overall Impression: I am not good at reviewing poetry, I care not for the rules, I only know what speaks to me. I liked your little poem, it gave beauty to pain.
Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome!
Readability: A well written and sad little tale!
Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.
Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them!
Overall Impression: I am not good at reviewing poetry, I care not for the rules, I only know what I like. I enjoyed your little nature poem, it was very thought provoking.
Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome!
Readability: A well written and enjoyable read.
Suggestions: I am not sure why but the "wonder" of the 7th line kept throwing me off, I kept wanting to say "wander".
Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them!
Overall Impression: I am not the best at reviewing poetry, I only know what I like or what speaks to me. Yours is a sad and hurtful little poem with an interesting format.
Spelling/Grammar: I found only one spelling/grammar error for you to ponder:
1. In this section - You’re not hear with me to finish - you may want to change "hear" to "here".
Readability: A well written little read.
Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.
Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them!
Overall Impression: I am not good at reviewing poetry, I care not for the rules, I only know what I enjoy reading. I enjoyed your little poem, it was short and to the point! LOL (Sorry, I couldn't resist)
Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome!
Readability: A well written and thoroughly thought out bit of prose.
Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.
Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them!
Overall Impression: I am not good at reviewing poetry, I care not for the rules, I only know what I like. I enjoyed the meaning this little poem conveyed!
Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome!
Readability: A well written and introspective read!
Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.
Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them!
Overall Impression: What?! I'm still upset about Brando!
Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome!
Readability: A well written and very entertaining read!
Suggestions: I have no suggestions. You had asked a question at the beginning of this story regarding whether or not to expand it. Since this was written several years ago I am hoping you have already done just that. If so, send me the link, I would love to read more!
Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them!
Overall Impression: Saturnites pretending to be human....very interesting.
Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome!
Readability: A well written and entertaining read!
Suggestions: I have no suggestions of any kind, but, I do hope there is a sequel. It would be quite entertaining to read a description on how to use a toilet or a shower or on why humans have pets. Can't wait!
Overall Impression: The children of this union should be very interesting!
Spelling/Grammar: I found only two spelling/grammar errors for you to ponder:
1. In this sentence - the knight broke free with a mighty road - you may want to change "road" to "roar".
2. In this sentence - and drew her into loving embrace. - you may want to insert "a" after "into".
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