I enjoied reading this, it is very good. i felt the emotions they helt back from eachother. it has a great flow to it, and i look forward to reading more of it. it is so difficult for friends to admitt that they have hidden feelings for eachother. blessed be.
That is such a tear jerker. it is very beautiful to read about your sisterly love. i felt alot of emotions going into the writing. that is a very sweet picture of the two of yous together. the poem was very well put together. i am sorry for your loss. blessed be.
this is a very imaginative, well put together work of poetry. it reminds me of when i read those romance novels based in scotland, some are based on actual events with a lil fiction spun into them. it reminds me how scotland & ireland fought to free themselves from englands law. keep up the good work. blessed be.
that was a very weird but well wrote work of poetry. i have to admit that it did elude me some. Correct me if i am wrong, the way i understood it that this person cheated on someone that she supposely loved. i thought it was good, so plz keep writing.blessed be.
This was another great work of poetry that I had the honor to review. It is very inspiritional, imagitive, and religious. I gave you a perfect rating cause it was outstanding, although I would like to read more from you, and it is good that you feel so close to god,it would be nice to review something else once in awhile. blessed be.
I blieve this is the first time I read one your poems, of course I could be wrong I read so many.correct me if i am. I have to admit it is a perfect writing, imagitive, humorous, and somewhat heart felt. I enjoied reading this and I hope to read more from you in the future.blessed be.
To be honest, I really don't know how to review this, not because I don't think is good, but because it is short and confuses me somewhat. The only thing i can figure is someone or something watching a town from a far. you are talented though,please keep up the good work.blessed be.
I enjoied reading this work of poetry. It was sweet, extremely inspirational, imagitive, although most would not understand the point that you are trying to get at, I did. You are imagining what it would be like to be you, so you decided to watch yourself from afar. A great poem. blessed be.
Reading this was a good work of poetry, it does have imagination, although not alot. It is emotional, but again not overly emotional. I found the poem gothic and very depressing. I gave you a 4.0, cause I believe it could be better. you are talented, and good luck with the rest of your writing.blessed be.
another piece of work of poetry. I would imagine this be a second part of the angels, but I could be wrong. I can feel her sorrow as I read the poem, she feels lost and alone. I can relate to these feelings, i felt that way several times in my life. you have talent. good luck. blessed be.
i found reading this work of poetry ejoiable. It is very good. It contains a lot of emotional pain, especially at the end. I liked the ending alot, but it was so sad, but yet happy. Sad because the love of her life died, and happy cause her wish was grantd to never be apart. good luck.blessed be.
I just loved this work of poetry. It is extremely emotional, I almost was crying at the end. I know how it is to feel that way, for I felt the same way one time, and I never told him, but as far as I know he still lives. I feel sorry the lost. good luck.blessed be.
This work of poetry was very emotionally moving.I felt the emotions that came from you while reading this poem. I am feel so depressed knowing that someone else is suffering the same way. I used to have depression real bad with anxiety, and I learned to control those dark emotions. so good luck.blessed be.
I found it enjoiable reading about one of the many talented people. I have read so many it's sometimes hard to keep up. I believe it took alot of courage to write aboput yourself, and post it on writing.com. Several of the poems that i posted, come mostly from my emotions, but nobody really knows the real me.I might take your advice someday,but for now i would like to remain somewhat a mystery. good luck.blessed be.
The story is good for a scientific one. I like the idea of putting mythology, scientific, and government together. It has imagination, the beginning started out good, i enjoied the chapters about joshua, wish there was more on him, he peaked my interest.you are talented.good luck with the rest of the book.blessed be.
your story was a good one, but it needs more emotion.If you don't mind me saying, maybe spice it with a romance,or have one of her close relatives,maybe a best friend,boyfriend die in the bombing. have her not know until the day of the service. you are talented,good luck with the rest of the story.blessed be.
I ENJOIED THIS SHORT STORY EMMENSLEY. THAT IS THE KIND OF LOVE MOST WOMEN DREAM ABOUT HAVING,BUT DID HAVE TO DIE. IT ENDED HAPPY FOR HER, BUT IT WOULD OF MADE HER EVEN MORE HAPPIER IF HE LEFT HIS CHILD BEHIND.JUST AN IDEA. YOU ARE VERY TALENTED.BLESSED BE.
i gave you a perfect rating. i found this sonnet very inspiritional. the idea of the angel and making her your wife at the end was unique, and imaginative. i enjoied the beginning also, the person in the poem seemed very intuned with the forces of nature. i will try to read more of your writings.blessed be.
THIS POEM IS INDEED A 5.O, JUST PERFECT. WHEN I READ THE TITLE OF THE POEM, IT MADE ME VERY CURIOUS. I THOUGHT I WAS GOING TO BE READING SOMETHING REALLY FREAKY ABOUT THE NATURE OF MAN,LOL. BUT THE WASN'T THE CASE. WHAT I READ WAS VERY TRUE ABOUT THE NATURE OF MAN. YOU ARE VERY TALENTED KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. BLESSED BE.
It seems like when its love or lust,maybe both. You can never get enough of that kind of addiction. Enjoy those kind of drugs while the supplies last.LOL.
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