Oh so true, for I am there with you. Go to the kitchen to get something and wonder what I am there for. The joys of getting older. The title of this piece drew me in and after the first verse I was hooked. And the names of actors--- no way. I can't even try anymore. I just admit I don't know and go on. Thanks for sharing this. I really enjoy knowing that we are not alone, Maci
That is so cool! I have never read a Nonet poem like that before! And this was your first try? Wow I am impressed. The words are beautifully written to tell a story and keep in the rules. So, I may have to try this. Thank you for sharing it. Well Done!
Maci
I love this! I was hooked with the title. Pulled in by the entertaining way she made her decision to ask Dad if Mom says no! Very familiar with that one. Her way to the popcorn.
The treats just kept on coming. wonderfully written, Thank you so much for sharing! Maci
I hear ya, Ms. Dawn! I have had many nights like that,as well. Pillows do not block it nor does hiding in the closet, for that matter. Thanks for sharing this. Isn't it good to know we are not alone? This is very well written. Very easy to read. You hooked me with the title. Well Done! Maci
LOL I stand corrected!! LOL I love this You have brought down all the fabrics of my whole upbringing lol. Very Clever and very well written. Having an ex- I had to giggle in the last verse. Thank you so very much for sharing this and putting a smile on my face. Maci
Very clever, very cool. The title drew me in. For My mother made all of my kids a quilt when they graduated High School. She spent hours and hours on them. This piece is very well written. I like the style that this poem is written in. Very easy to read. Well Done! Thanks for sharing ! Maci
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This is a beautiful poem. I bet there are more people who feel like this then we can imagine. I've often wonder if actor and actresses feel this way. I almost cheered when I read "the stings are gone". It was easy to read and I was hooked by the title. Well done! Maci
Awe how very cool. I love this. I think we all have a box of memories, if we are lucky enough to not lose it along the way. I walked down memory lane with you. The first verse hooked me for sure. And the rest was just the cherry on top! Well done, Thanks for sharing. Maci
LOL I love this image. The turkey looks like I feel after Thanksgiving Dinner. The tilt of the eyebrows makes the turkey look (pardon the pun) Stuffed! The skinny legs are cute as can be. I wish I could draw like this. Very inviting! So cute! Thanks for sharing. Have a great evening.
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Oh those Holy jeans lol, So over priced and over bleached! Ya gotta love them!
I found this poem easy to read, flowing very well. I think we all can identify.
Who hasn't had a pair of jeans? Even little tikes,where the pocket is most of the material. Thank you for sharing.
Very clever! So well done, I was hooked by the first two lines and drawn in. I was not disappointed! I don't believe I have ever seen a cotton wood tree. but, you can bet I will go look for one on the internet in a moment. I truly enjoyed this. Now, to go find a cotton wood tree! Thanks for sharing. Maci
So sad! Talk about missing the forest for the trees. What A beautiful poem. Well intended advice. Easy to read and hooked me in right away. I know so many who would read that sign and have the same response as she did. I guess that why I started with so sad. Well done! Maci
How cool. I never thought of painting like that, How beautifully this is written. Have you ever read something and wished you had written it. This is one of those kind of pieces. Bravo! Well Done! I wish I could give it ten stars. I have often thought of a morning as an empty canvass but never saw it like this. I will never look at art the same way! Thanks for sharing Maci
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So Cool! I can see this as a child's book. What a great read. Easy to read and very easy to picture, The words you used made the poem have a life of it's own. Way to go! My Favorite part..."He calls the Moon-bats off their upside down perches
At the dark side of the moon
They yammer and clamor
Sing "The Star-Spangled Banner"
Wake the beasts which dance and dance the night away"
LOL I pictured "moon-bats" with space suits on lol Thanks for sharing.
Maci
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I like this poem. Who don't feel like they are being watched these days? Everywhere, at all times. This really hit home to me. My daughter had her identity stolen. They even had a copy of her college picture and used it for drivers licenses. My favorite part is how you summed it all up ..." Don't look too closely
Tarry not!
Or you may just find
A familiar eye or two
They'll keep an eye on you!"
Thanks for sharing this.It's a easy read and well expressed, I really enjoyed it.
This was a very cool test. Sadly I missed 16 But, I learned a lot as well Thanks for sharing this. Do you have one for poetry want-to-be writer? Well done!
Yep! That about sums up the world today. I think you speak fore many people. My favorite part is "Can I supersize my sorrows
Can I get a side of celebrity
Is that beer at least five dollars
How many calories
A superstar keeps their figure"
Well done!
I really enjoy this. Easy to read. My favorite part...
"Measuring each drop of sand
That flows through the hourglass
Can only mean safety and boredom;
Meanwhile the lucky few live
Extraordinarily busy and happy lives,
And those with no inspiring means
Produce excessive amounts
Of hereditary dishonesty."
What a powerful pull into the poem. Well done! Maci
What a wonderful morning read. I really enjoyed this. My favor part..." all the blessings we embrace,
in this life, they are just a taste..." oh how true! Thanks for sharing and Making my day. Maci
This lighten my heart. I have 2 dogs and a cat the cost me more than raising my kids! lol
But what's a mother of fur babies to do? I hope you got the name on the sign and plenty of pics! Well Done!
I LOVE THIS! Thanks for reminding people that no matter what big or small God's got it all. I can see the children singing as the song fade out! Thanks for sharing!
We got to look at the Lord and not the waves. The waves being our doubts and fear. If we keep looking up instead of looking at our doubts and fears we could be unstoppable! Love this thanks for sharing!
This is so true. I can't even begin to understand how God must have felt seeing His Son go through all that He went through-- for us! If anyone ever says they have not experienced God's Grace remind them of that! Loved the Poem, Well Done!
I love this! I was caught in the rain just yesterday. I was so much fun! I think as adults we need to do this more often. I like your writing style, fun and easy to read. Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you! Maci
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