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Review by Anna
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This piece was very dark and made me feel alienated by the dark character which was never seen. I am going to try and write about the light side. I feel as intense about the light side as your eyes in this piece seemed to center around things which were in the shadows rather than in the sunlight. Light is where hope and faith abound. But good writing overall.
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for entry "Stolen" 
Review by Anna
Rated: 18+ | (2.5)
I felt that this ptece seemed to ramble around a bit. I know what the main idea is because of the ending line. I can relate though because I once had a book which I had written and was about to send to a publisher stolen right out of my locker. So I can understand the anger and frustration explained in this writing.
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Review of Enough to Grasp  
Review by Anna
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great imaging of what total silence can feel like and the joy of being able to finally make all that you wanted. The idea of waiting for the sound of footsteps coming to your door had me waiting on the edge of my seat waitning to see what was going to happen. Your use of building up to you final sentence was good. Just after the first couple of sentences I was really drawn into the story. Keep writing.
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Review by Anna
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good writing but a bit confusing. The characters thoughts seemed to be all over the place. This makes it hard for the reader to folllow the story. I think that a little more intro into different actions of the main character would make this story a more readable story. The writing itself is good and the grammer seems to be all in order. Just try and think about readability from the readers point of view.
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Review of Our Reflection  
Review by Anna
Rated: E | (4.5)
Your poem was well written and expressed some unspoken thoughts and feelings. I csnnot say I truly enjoyed the poem because it made do some soul searching of my own, But it was really well written,
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